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I hope you like My video idea..

A simple video idea of the program's interface and some features youtube link https://youtu.be/m6LN7dMg5zs


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  • mohamedelwater
    mohamedelwater
    • 1 ay önce

    Thanks ♥

    • 1 ay önce
  • hkbire
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 1 ay önce

    Thanks Mohamed!
    I am awarding you with this contest.
    Waiting to receive the final materials!

    • 1 ay önce
  • mohamedelwater
    mohamedelwater
    • 1 ay önce

    you are right

    Thanks for your feedback



    Please watch this edit



    https://drive.google.com/file/d/1anftiSyMnPHK2UzfRrgU0LlmXYMZjuZo/view?usp=sharing

    • 1 ay önce
  • hkbire
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    Hi Mohamad! Thanks for all the changes.
    Could we extend the first and last slides a little bit?
    After the line "Hiit interval workout app" appears the slide instantly terminates - there's no time to read the line

    • 2 ay önce
    1. mohamedelwater
      mohamedelwater
      • 2 ay önce

      you are right
      Thanks for your feedback

      Please watch this edit

      https://drive.google.com/file/d/1anftiSyMnPHK2UzfRrgU0LlmXYMZjuZo/view?usp=sharing

      • 2 ay önce
  • hkbire
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    Hi Mohamed,
    This looks really good.
    One last thing I would like us to work on - the last content frame (before showing the download prompt), around 26 seconds, has captions appear at the same place as the man exercising.
    this makes it really hard to read the captions

    What can be done about that?

    • 2 ay önce
    1. mohamedelwater
      mohamedelwater
      • 2 ay önce

      Yes, you are right

      The scripting window has been modified

      To match the athletic man without hiding the writing



      Please check this edit.



      https://drive.google.com/file/d/1b_T9LubVrndt70pSD9Wya7CsI5xYwDRJ/view?usp=sharing

      • 2 ay önce
  • mohamedelwater
    mohamedelwater
    • 2 ay önce

    Yes, you are right
    The scripting window has been modified
    To match the athletic man without hiding the writing

    Please check this edit.

    https://drive.google.com/file/d/1b_T9LubVrndt70pSD9Wya7CsI5xYwDRJ/view?usp=sharing

    • 2 ay önce
  • mohamedelwater
    mohamedelwater
    • 2 ay önce

    https://drive.google.com/file/d/1VZEDW-SAqhgZtFFf3ci7UnDQyOpruiZq/view?usp=sharing

    Please check this edit .

    • 2 ay önce
  • hkbire
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    Hi Mohamad, this is great progress!
    Is there a way to slow down the transitions?
    The captions are impossible to read at this speed of transition
    thanks

    • 2 ay önce
    1. mohamedelwater
      mohamedelwater
      • 2 ay önce

      Ok, I'm going to slow the frame down a little

      • 2 ay önce
  • hkbire
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    Hi Mohamad!
    Thanks for the amendment.
    A few changes I would like made:
    1. Please see the attached doc for the captions I want - https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1-thk7nEISEnCa44yS0nlRjQW5WT9ByXnA5hVXGleZdw/edit?usp=sharing
    2. I think having the screenshots twice (once in the background and once in the foreground) is a little overwhelming - can we remove the one in the background?
    3. Can we integrate the guy working out with the captions so they don't appear in the same time?

    thanks

    • 2 ay önce
    1. mohamedelwater
      mohamedelwater
      • 2 ay önce

      https://drive.google.com/file/d/1P9kCIzxBQ9TzsjKaUZkJK92TxrrHRR60/view?usp=sharing

      The idea of what was sent in the file
      With removing the pictures from the background
      And incorporate exercise man

      • 2 ay önce
  • mohamedelwater
    mohamedelwater
    • 2 ay önce

    You have not yet reviewed the amendment

    https://drive.google.com/file/d/1m5Jy1GJrj_6pfndXmgdyiq5kaw3Gg1SH/view?usp=sharing

    • 2 ay önce
  • hkbire
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    Thanks for submitting Mohamed!
    I like the direction you've started.
    A couple of comments though:
    The video gets pretty crowded - with the movement of the exercise on the right and then the changing screenshots and text on the left.
    Is there a way to get the idea across with simpler frames?

    • 2 ay önce
    1. mohamedelwater
      mohamedelwater
      • 2 ay önce

      Thanks for your review
      I can make the exercise video in a blurry background
      Focus more on screenshots in a simpler way

      • 2 ay önce
    2. mohamedelwater
      mohamedelwater
      • 2 ay önce

      https://drive.google.com/file/d/1m5Jy1GJrj_6pfndXmgdyiq5kaw3Gg1SH/view?usp=sharing

      • 2 ay önce
  • mohamedelwater
    mohamedelwater
    • 2 ay önce

    https://youtu.be/m6LN7dMg5zs

    • 2 ay önce

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