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CV REMADE

Yes, acording to me your content is simple but dynamic and effective. Only 3 points I'd like to mention. Actually your C.V is quite profeaaionl and yes dynamic. And all the 3 points (whatever ) I'm going to draw your attention is not any gramatical fault actually but a matter of having better sound. 1. You wrote "An aptitude of visualising and analysing " I found it's better to write "An aptitude of ....." 2.You mentioned "I'm able to develop a wisdom of the underlying data ................." I prefer it to use "the wisdom" or just "wisdom" 3. "I am looking for an interesting, dynamic and challenging role and in return will provide an exceptional level of commitment and enthusiasm with my work." I changed it as you can see "will provide an exceptional level of commitment and enthusiasm with my work." After that adjusted some simple line up and fonts .... that's all! I think your content will work fine. Good luck


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