Some Suggestions and Key Point Extraction
I think this is important for you to notice that some of the e-commerce web giants in India like snapdeal and flipkart has used mainly figures to impress the population, not just a youth tone. So may be you can consider this change in your "About Us" page too, I'm thinking out of box for you. I could have done what you've asked for but I'm trying to bring to your notice what is working out there. If you can give figures about your corporation - say - how many categories, and how many products, how many markets are searched, how much is your team strength etc. then one can produce these figures in infographs which can then be inserted in your website's About Us page. Hope it helped.