Becky...I've made the revisions and have 4 for you to choose from but I am unable to submit them because the contest says pending. I think you need to either extend the contest in order for me to submit them.
I've made the changes that you suggested. This version is very similar to the my last entry (#63) but I've stylized the font a bit to match the style of the peach. I've included your name Peaches in both solid black and a second version with it in a darker shade of Teal.