Interesting idea. I feel like it's airy and light, which is good. i feel like it's good to emphasize the lyne as you do. maybe there's a way to remove the 'body' word and/or have the 'b' be replaced by the body form. I like the concept. I am looking for nice detail and depth, so while simple and airy is good, that depth (or more symbolism if we could find it) would be something to add. Thanks for your submission.