Your drawing is great but the ad tells nothing about the company or what the headline means. Have you ever designed an ad before? I'm just curious. There should be bullet points regarding what the company's services are. You don't need to included website: phone: email: prior to the information. People know what those things are just by themselves. You just have to indicate them. ie. 50statedmv.com firstname.lastname@example.org 578-208-1DMV (1368). Also the logo blue text cannot be read. It's too small and too light over your yellow.
Again, I love the art. It's just missing the actual "ad".