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Hi, Please check attached design and please message me if you have any feedback. Thank you.

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  • dngvw
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    • 5 yıl önce

    i will award you the contest now so you know that we'll finish working together...

    • 5 yıl önce
  • dngvw
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    • 5 yıl önce

    hi...remove all text for the step 1 and step 4...step 4 graphic is close but not quite right--we need the left hand side of 18 not to be bullet points but to be vertical--don't repeat the text in the spreadsheet--that will complete...please upload the files in freelancer once you are complete--as it will be late for you and i am traveling--have to give to printer today. thanks!

    • 5 yıl önce
  • dngvw
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    • 5 yıl önce

    also, remember to make the header for step 4 1 line vs 2 to give you more room for the graphics...also, on step 2 can you ensure the key has "educators / service providers"...you currently have that written in the reverse...in step 1--please remove the text bullets --I'll just speak to these...these are the final changes. I will need the file in several formats...pdf, .ai/.eps, I will also need the community stakeholder model as a separate graphic...same formats...thanks. if possible, can we complete in the next hour? please advise...time is of the essence

    • 5 yıl önce
    1. d3stin
      d3stin
      • 5 yıl önce

      Hi, thank you for your help. I will start revising now. I'm currently checking all your updated file. I'm sorry I'm a bit confused with this comment "Then update the spreadsheet on page 19 to include the actual text that goes with a000a, a0044 (this will show that we are taking this data from slide 18 and associating the content with the right 3 columns" ---- Should I just use the new table you provided in the new STep 4 PPT file or to combine some part from Slide 10 + some from Slide 18?

      • 5 yıl önce
  • dngvw
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    • 5 yıl önce

    Contact Mod:
    -Line 1: "Jim Smith III, CADF Fellow"
    -Line 2: "Adjunct Professor, UMUC
    -Line 3: "CEO, Kinetic Potential Scholars"
    -Line 4: "Jim.Smith@faculty.umuc.edu"
    -Life 5: "O: 301.883.8256 C: 240.417.5111"

    • 5 yıl önce
  • dngvw
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    • 5 yıl önce

    There are 3 sections at the very top of the poster--where the logo is (this is fine), where the title is (this needs mods), where my contact info is (this needs mods):

    Title Mods: 2nd line should read, "Jim Smith III, Cybersecurity Advanced Degree Fellow"

    Contact Mods:
    - Line 1: "Jim Smith III, CADF Fellow"

    • 5 yıl önce
  • d3stin
    d3stin
    • 5 yıl önce

    Hi, Please check the revised file and update your comment. Thank you!

    • 5 yıl önce
    1. d3stin
      d3stin
      • 5 yıl önce

      OK, Noted for Step 5. So it will be Slide 22 + 23. And the name below the title back to the previous title?

      • 5 yıl önce
    2. dngvw
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      • 5 yıl önce

      i have also provided updated headers and content for the text at the top--please look very carefully--(I've dropped the "s" on the headers making them singular vs. plural) and added / changed some text

      • 5 yıl önce
  • dngvw
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    • 5 yıl önce

    step 5 name is fine--and yes--slides 22+ 23. I've added a new file for step 4 to help communicate what I need--we only have a few hours left so please work diligently. I'm now reviewing all final text and will send all changes on text to you shortly

    • 5 yıl önce
  • d3stin
    d3stin
    • 5 yıl önce

    Hi, Thank you for your feedback. Actually I have some questions to clarify with you, please help to answer below questions:

    • 5 yıl önce
    1. dngvw
      Yarışma Sahibi
      • 5 yıl önce

      Step 5: Slides 22 is the additional slide i was referencing--would 21 fit too (if not that's ok)

      Step 4: Slides 17 + 18 = 19 (for the earlier point I was making)

      • 5 yıl önce
    2. d3stin
      d3stin
      • 5 yıl önce

      Morning. Noted I will revise accordingly and get back to you again. Thanks

      • 5 yıl önce
  • dngvw
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    • 5 yıl önce

    step 4--proficiency levels (or the KP PMM from step 3 carries over to step 4 and slides, 6,9,10 should be reflected here vs. the text--the goal is to show the proficiency levels--along with the requirements--(i.e., a0001, a0044...etc)...the way to think of this is that 6+9 gives you slide 10 (hope that helps)--the audience needs to see the #'s from slide 6...the ksa's from slide 9 (the rhs of the graphic) and then how they combine

    • 5 yıl önce
    1. d3stin
      d3stin
      • 5 yıl önce

      Sure, no problem. Thank you.

      • 5 yıl önce
    2. dngvw
      Yarışma Sahibi
      • 5 yıl önce

      regarding your question: QUESTION: Shall I use the first version graphic and Stel 2/3 graphic to follow the first version color scheme OR Shall I use the shape of first version graphic but the color concept still using the 2nd version (e.g. green for funders, etc)

      The new color scheme should be used with the previous shape--from step 1--making step 2 diagram more in line with shape (i.e., step 1 should seem like a cut out of the step 2 diagram--and now that you are showing them side by side--it should be easy for the audience to understand the relationship)...please let me know if you have a question--I don't want you to waste time or energy--and again I'm so sorry about the mixup on the ppt slides...i'm in another meeting for a bit but will be checking on your progress for questions--thanks!

      • 5 yıl önce
  • dngvw
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 5 yıl önce

    please remove "rudy watson" from the title

    the info in the title on the rhs should read

    Jim Smith III, CADF Fellow
    CEO, Kinetic Potential Scholars

    • 5 yıl önce
    1. dngvw
      Yarışma Sahibi
      • 5 yıl önce

      sorry hit return to quickly

      Jim Smith III, CADF Fellow

      CEO, Kinetic Potential Scholars
      Adjunct Professor, UMUC
      email address
      (you can put the tele #s on same line for space)

      • 5 yıl önce
    2. d3stin
      d3stin
      • 5 yıl önce

      OK. Noted

      • 5 yıl önce
  • dngvw
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 5 yıl önce

    I will be checking for your updates regularly today...

    • 5 yıl önce
    1. d3stin
      d3stin
      • 5 yıl önce

      Great, Thank you

      • 5 yıl önce
  • dngvw
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    • 5 yıl önce

    step 5--yes, these are the dashboards I was referencing (if I want to make small changes to the content on these are you able to do so?)...please add slide 11 to this section to the right of the dashboards--and update the title to say "Executing and Monitoring the Supply Chain"

    Thank you...

    • 5 yıl önce
    1. d3stin
      d3stin
      • 5 yıl önce

      If you want me to adjust the dashboard, please send me the working file of it. Because currently the dashboard images attached in the Power point file is only inserted picture/Jpeg file ( Non editable) which means I would have to re-do everything - start from scratch if there is any changes needed). I need the working file from you to be able to edit it. Secondly Slide #11 on my PPT is Talent Supply Chain which already used for Step 4. Please advise.

      • 5 yıl önce
  • dngvw
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    • 5 yıl önce

    Step 2/3: Please remove "reggie foster" and the timeline above the main graphic (this is redundant to the info in the graphic itself)...the white arrow on the left representing the input is difficult to see against the white backdrop and the red arrow representing the output overlapping the "pipeline" looks a bit distracting--can this be integrated a bit more?)...for the proficiency level--please remove "elementary" from the introduced--the first phase of the proficiency level...

    • 5 yıl önce
    1. d3stin
      d3stin
      • 5 yıl önce

      OK, Noted

      • 5 yıl önce
  • d3stin
    d3stin
    • 5 yıl önce

    Hi, haven't heard from you again... As for now I use Slide 23 for Step 5 ( I think it's the closest with what you describe: 2 dashboard). If what you mean is different, please let me know I'll change it.

    • 5 yıl önce
    1. d3stin
      d3stin
      • 5 yıl önce

      Note: File is compressed to lower resolution and smaller dimension. Actual file is in the correct dimension & hi-res 300 dpi.

      • 5 yıl önce
    2. dngvw
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      • 5 yıl önce

      My apologies for the delay in responding...I did not see your updates until now...a few comments. I like the layout...it's easy to follow and think it flows well with the text at the top a few questions / request for changes

      1. I thought the step 1 graphic in the first version was more appealing--is it possible to change the step 2/3 graphic to be more in line with this or is that too challenging? These 2 graphics will persist after this conference...

      • 5 yıl önce
  • dngvw
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 5 yıl önce

    step 5 - lets incorporate slide 14--and change the title to "Monitoring the Supply Chain"

    • 5 yıl önce
    1. d3stin
      d3stin
      • 5 yıl önce

      I work in 50x30 size as you mentioned the poster space is only 60:40. So there is spare as I'm not sure how is the condition on site (E.g. there 60:40 include frame, etc). Just to be save..

      • 5 yıl önce
    2. d3stin
      d3stin
      • 5 yıl önce

      It will be helpful if you could just share or upload the particular slide for Step 5? Thank you

      • 5 yıl önce
  • dngvw
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 5 yıl önce

    finally...I'm providing the KP logo--lets use this at the top right so both KP and UMUC are represented--and you can then use the kp logo in the center of step 1 if you like...really like this direction...thank you and looking forward to seeing your updates

    • 5 yıl önce
  • dngvw
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    • 5 yıl önce

    The bottom right box with the names/titles can be integrated with the top--and remove Rudy

    • 5 yıl önce
  • dngvw
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 5 yıl önce

    step 4 - can we integrate slides 9 & 11-#11 shows us defining what should be done--and 9 shows the skills we are developing (or 9 is the what and 11 is the how)

    • 5 yıl önce
  • dngvw
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    • 5 yıl önce

    2. Really like the direction of the community stakeholder model--this is the essence of the pipeline and should feel like a cutout (think of a pipe that you take a slice out of or a cable may be a better example)--please rotate the circle so the customer is on the left and the employer is to the right which will make this diagram aligned to step 2 with the customer as the input to the system and employer as the output....also, can you show more of a connection to the individual stakeholders to KP (i.e., maybe extend the individual sections or create a more distinguishing way to represent KP with a separate color maybe besides grey?)--the color codes are also important--they should be distinct...funders should be green (represents $$), the others can be at your discretion that look good aesthetically--but they must carry through to the step 2 diagram (for example, you have educators as red in 1 and yellow in the other)

    • 5 yıl önce
  • dngvw
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    • 5 yıl önce

    Hi Destiny...thanks for your submission...I like the direction. A few comments...

    1. I think the intro/abstract/methods/discussion * conclusions will look better aligned vertically on the left or horizontally on the top--just easier to read given how busy the rest of the diagram is"

    • 5 yıl önce

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