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This one is my lyric as you asked, I've been working with lyrics and typography for a while now, and if there's something you want to change just tell me

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  • AidanAzhar
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    i think the some sentences can be broken down a bit further. The format of the video is like I asked so I'm happy with that. I like that the background looks alive and that you've even included a fade out for the track. so -

    try to break down the sentences further, it doesnt only have to be one sentence on screen at a time. Explore a different effect for the lyric transitions, perhaps a shadow on the album arts corners to make it pop out from the background

    • 2 ay önce
    1. JeanCastroM
      JeanCastroM
      • 2 ay önce

      and if i leave the sentences like that, only each word appears in 1 time?

      • 2 ay önce
    2. JeanCastroM
      JeanCastroM
      • 2 ay önce

      tell me on the chat so we can discuss more

      • 2 ay önce
  • JeanCastroM
    JeanCastroM
    • 3 ay önce

    I did this for sentences, because it makes it easier for people to read and understand, but if you want me to change, just tell me

    • 3 ay önce