Lips are PERFECT could you move the lips down slightly, increase the dip in the hair, simplify the nose some more, and the lines on her eyes, the bottom, more them up so they connect with the top lines, and increase the lashes at the outer edges. also her bangs might look better something like this?
I wish contests would let me just chat without having to give a ton of feedback, I feel like a tyrant barking out orders haha.
could her head also be a bit wider? her eyes almsot seem too close.
Must say this is my favourit design to date!
Your competitors have their work cut out for them.
could some type of detail on the dress be added? I feel like she should lose the sleeves and show some shoulder?