my second
I just made a little bit more of the teaser. Let me know if you like the style. Have a good weekend
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Yarışma Sahibi - 4 yıl önce
Dear Sengsavane, thank you for your submissions. I like the overall style, but I'm looking for a faster pace. Therefore, the drawing hand and the curtain is too much. When I said "like theatre coulisses" I meant that the shelves appear from the left and right like painted or printed images of shelves that are pushed into the scene, or clap upwards. They can very well wiggle or judder a bit as they appear and make some mechanical noises. You see, the student is all of a sudden in this environment, so it has to go fast. The student looks a bit like a nerd. That is good, but he should be even more a nerd. A friendly and relatable supernerd.
- 4 yıl önce
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sengsavane
- 4 yıl önce
Thank you very much taking your time and leaving me feedbacks! I'll download the images now that you posted! It'll help a lot for sure! I will work on the pacing of the video and rework the student character. I'll upload my new entry hopefully tomorrow evening or the day after. If you have any additional thoughts let me know. have a nice weekend. :) Savane
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Yarışma Sahibi - 4 yıl önce
Also, the face moves still somewhat realistic in your version. When later the magic hand cuts open his skull and fixes the brain, that will of course not be realistic, so I assume it is better to start with unrealistic animations right away. The magic hand I spoke about is not the narrator, it is something like a second character, the divine intervention that fixes all problems of the guy - in a somewhat awkward, but efficient way.
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