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main page sample design

Dear sir. I harmonized some designs on your main page/home page! with while scrolling! just check the design..the footer can be changed! if you like my design then please give your feedback and feel free to tell me if you need any changes!! if you like my design then i will design the other pages also if you want to see thank you sir..

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  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    Dear Razu,
    Thank you for submitting your first entry. I will try to give a straight and honest review as based on my experience, that helps the most
    - This design is too cluttery, it overpowers the content in several sections. Needs to be cleared up for best result
    - The colors don't work together, I suggest to pick pre-made color palette and try to work in line with it. You can generate color palettes on several sites. I can recommend: colourlovers.com
    - I counted 6 fonts on the website, please try to limit them to 2 for consistency reasons
    - All call to action buttons use different colors, also I have seen 2 type of call to action buttons (one with a symbol in it and one with only text). Please try to use the same call to action button on the whole page for consistency reasons
    I hope that I was able to give you clear and straight forward feedback and that you will find it constructive and useful.
    Looking forward to see your solutions to the issues listed in the feedback

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    This color doesn't work on this background

    • 2 ay önce
    1. RazuAhmedJoy
      RazuAhmedJoy
      • 2 ay önce

      it can be changed in any color

      • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    The desing of this box can work, it looks like an educational certificate, just needs more working

    • 2 ay önce
    1. RazuAhmedJoy
      RazuAhmedJoy
      • 2 ay önce

      yes sir..i tried to keep it in simple! if you can specify any work then i can upgrade it in this box

      • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    This color is too overpowering

    • 2 ay önce
    1. RazuAhmedJoy
      RazuAhmedJoy
      • 2 ay önce

      i thought that the color will interact the visitors

      • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    This section is harmonized, but plain

    • 2 ay önce
    1. RazuAhmedJoy
      RazuAhmedJoy
      • 2 ay önce

      i dont understand about plain!!

      • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    This seperator / border doesn't work

    • 2 ay önce
    1. RazuAhmedJoy
      RazuAhmedJoy
      • 2 ay önce

      i can remove it

      • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    This section needs better decoration

    • 2 ay önce
    1. RazuAhmedJoy
      RazuAhmedJoy
      • 2 ay önce

      i can do it better..

      • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    We need to showcase the full version of the logo on the mainpage for the first load

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    These question marks look like fonts that couldn't be identified by the browser and have been substituted with question marks

    • 2 ay önce
    1. RazuAhmedJoy
      RazuAhmedJoy
      • 2 ay önce

      dear sir the bird in this section is in png format! and you can put the question mark in the png image and set it on your website . and it will work perfectly! because then it will be a image.not any fonts

      • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    This call to action button doesn't contrast with this background

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    The color of the header text doesn't contrast with this background

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    This font doesn't work in the header. Header needs to be clear and straight forward, easy to read. Also text needs to clearly stand out

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    These fonts don't work. Also the text color doesn't contrast well with the background

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    The purple border line color doesn't work with the pink background

    • 2 ay önce
    1. RazuAhmedJoy
      RazuAhmedJoy
      • 2 ay önce

      dear sir from your feedbacks i have found that you have problems with coloring! but the colors can be changed..and the separator in product section can be deleted!

      • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    Try to make the search field more prominent. It is the main function of the website, it should not be overpowered and needs to stand out strongly

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    Placing this sentence here is not a good idea from a structural point of view. It is semantically confusing this way

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    This background is too cluttery, overpowering the content, hard to read anything on it. This block is very important, as it contains the site's main function (search) This needs to be very clean to support the search field to the greatest extent

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    This font type is way too much, and the wave like presentation doesn't serve it justice. Try a less is more approach, that could help

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    This background color doesn't contrast with the background color of the section above. It contrasts with the section below, but isn't compatible

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    The question marks don't fit the rest of the decoration on the website

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    This footer can be good or bad, depending on how you change the rest of the website based on the feedbacks

    • 2 ay önce

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