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Athidalo Website Redesign Revision

Hi! These are the designs that I came up with as I kept your feedback in mind. I've uploaded 4 files, 2 of which are dedicated for the Educator Profile as I was thinking of perhaps dividing the information into tabs for better UX. Do let me know what you think. Thank you.

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  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    in the original design this isn't a client testimonial, it is a message from the founder

    • 2 ay önce
    1. mnjavier
      mnjavier
      • 2 ay önce

      I apologize, it looks like I misunderstood.

      • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    Dear Marian,

    Thank you for your new entry. We like your style. You have good design taste and also good ideas. The only thing I would improve is that you are very generous with the white spaces and the scrolling distances. If you could make this design more compact, specially on the home page, that would go a long way.

    There are 5 freelancers who didn't submit anything yet, but are planning to add entries. I don't know how those will look like or if they will finish in time. But if we had to reward the contest now, then it's between you and one more freelancer.

    You have better design taste, but the other competitor has a more tight and compact structure. If you can solve the structure issues, then you would be ahead.

    • 2 ay önce
    1. mnjavier
      mnjavier
      • 2 ay önce

      Thank you very much. I appreciate the straight forward and honest comments. Also, it makes me really happy that you like my design! I will be working on the layout using your feedback as guidelines. Again, thanks!

      • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
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    • 2 ay önce

    Good idea

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
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    • 2 ay önce

    This could be a little bit bigger, but it's fine

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
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    • 2 ay önce

    This distance / white space could be less too

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
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    • 2 ay önce

    Distance between the "about" and the description could be less to make it more compact and spare some scrolling for the user

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
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    • 2 ay önce

    Maybe less white space

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
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    • 2 ay önce

    Same footer issue

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
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    • 2 ay önce

    Please use one color for the call to action buttons

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    This map looks good here, but functionally it was better position on the top of the page. I leave this decision with you

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    Good idea

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
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    • 2 ay önce

    Maybe rethink this element

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
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    • 2 ay önce

    A little bit bigger text would be easier to read

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    Good ideas

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    This footer is different then on the mainpage. It looks ok, but it's not consistent. Not sure which one is better. I'll leave that choice with you

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    I see you have made this field a little bit bigger, which is a good start. If you could make it even more prominent, that would be great. You can think about different way size is one, but other ideas are also welcome, just change carefully

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    This color is ok

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    This color is fine

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    This color is fine

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    This color is fine

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    Using one color for all titles in this section would be a more elegant solution maybe I think

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    Maybe a little bit bigger text would be easier to read

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    Maybe a little bit bigger text would be easier to read

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    Maybe a little bit bigger text would be easier to read

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    Maybe a little bit bigger text would be easier to read

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    Maybe a little bit bigger text would be easier to read

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    Maybe a little bit bigger text would be easier to read

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    Maybe a little bit bigger text would be easier to read

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    Maybe a little bit bigger text would be easier to read

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    Maybe a little bit bigger text would be easier to read

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    Maybe a little bit bigger text would be easier to read

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    Maybe a little bit bigger text would be easier to read

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    Maybe a little bit bigger text would be easier to read

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
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    • 2 ay önce

    Cute decoration

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
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    • 2 ay önce

    Cute decoration

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
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    • 2 ay önce

    this section takes up too much scrolling space this way

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    Please use one color for the call to action buttons

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    Please use one color for the call to action buttons

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    Too much white space

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    If these are the program highlights from our design (the list with check marks originally) then It would be great if you could get this section back into one section with the executive message and the program description to be more compact

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
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    • 2 ay önce

    This color doesn't contrast with the background, hard to see

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
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    • 2 ay önce

    This picture is huge, it overpowers the content, but it's cute

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    Too much white space

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
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    • 2 ay önce

    If you could bring back this section to be in one section with the program highlights and the program description, that would spare a lot of scrolling and make the presentation of these info's more compact, which would be great

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
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    • 2 ay önce

    This section takes too much space, it is high adds lots of scrolling space

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    This is a very strong color

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    This section is fine

    • 2 ay önce
  • alexmarket
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    Rest of the footer here is fine

    • 2 ay önce

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