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Hi, Have tried to ensure this entry meets your requirement. Would appreciate any feedback you may have to help refine it further. Thanks and Regards, Vimal

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  • nayakvimal
    nayakvimal
    • 2 ay önce

    I'd probably change the sentence to "Looking for Sigma Chi letters to furnish your home and office interiors?"

    • 2 ay önce
  • nayakvimal
    nayakvimal
    • 2 ay önce

    Unfortunately I saw this comment too late. Or would've incorporated it in the second draft :). Apologies.

    • 2 ay önce
  • nayakvimal
    nayakvimal
    • 2 ay önce

    Thanks for the feedback. I understand your concern and will be happy to work on it to suit your requirement. Please let me know.

    • 2 ay önce
  • bhametov
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 ay önce

    Hello Vimal, I really like your work. I have a couple of things to note - words like "adorn" are a bit too much for college-level frat boys =),

    • 2 ay önce