Freelancer:
kylejan
DataIQ Ad Script 2 - "Analyse, Predict, Plan"
This situation is perhaps slightly less relatable but far more exciting and really grabs the attention of the viewer (by putting the viewer in the position of a squad leader). Again, it addresses the viewer to catch their attention and set you apart from other advertisements.. The end shows how your product allows your potential clients to make decisions as effectively as a squad leader. I hope this is what you're looking for. Kyle :)