Genel Açıklama Panosu

  • KJudeFdo
    KJudeFdo
    • 1 ay önce

    Ahh, I see... Thank you for the feedback! If you want me to rewrite it, I'll be willing to give it a shot, shorten the story, try to smooth things out, and maybe delete some unnecessary elements... Anyway, I hope you find what you're looking for!

    • 1 ay önce
  • RhapsodeMonolith
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 1 ay önce

    It's an interesting idea, but is a little bored and too long.
    The best part is when he fall to the ground and returns to "reality".
    Also, the end is tragic and comic, and I like it.
    Also, I think it's a little psychological, and that's a good point.
    But it's insufficient.
    Thanks anyway.

    • 1 ay önce