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  Yarışma Sahibi

  • 9 yıl önce

  Greetings artists, sorry for the long-waiting, I also had some troubles with PC to fix.
  
  it wasnt an easy choice but we have considered #57 to be rightful winner for this contest, we also had to step back to our former title "Notte" as since "il buio dentro" is the title of a different somwhat recent book, so for better clarity we eventually considered the former alternative as final choice for the book.
  
  I want to clarify that I am aware that the title could could easily be changed, for instance if we had opted for the second title #61 would have won instead. I finally opted with the actual winner for originality of the concept, final cover is somehow more "catching" for the possible buyer also in thumbnail size.
  
  exactly I was particularly interested in #26 and #58 pls a few others, I'mno artist so I can just judge on overall impression a possible customer may have in watching a cover respect another, I'm not determining art-quality at all with this project.

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     archestry

     • 9 yıl önce

     Honestly i think mobys work is not so good. It has to be scary story but pink color and funky dude in hat dose not work in this scenario. Also you were so critical for the meaning of the illustration, but all of the sudden you just chose more catchy cover. What hand on the background is means? Why dude has zero emotions on his face? But that is just my opinion. Best regards.

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  Yarışma Sahibi

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  Greetings, this monday we will name a winner, thank you for your patience.

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     archestry

     • 9 yıl önce

     Great!

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  Yarışma Sahibi

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  Contest ending soon, thank you all for partecipation!
  
  There is left little time for modifications of sort; as the contest expires I'll promote a survey and collect feedback about published works, then name one winner; it wont be easy as I see a few possible candidates, however there will be only one winner at last.

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  archestry

  • 9 yıl önce

  Hello i have made a new entry its #62

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  Yarışma Sahibi

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  #57 please correct the title of the book accordingly
  #58 its well done but im not sure, it looks somewhat comic
  #59 improved, seems its going well, waiting for the final version

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     archestry

     • 9 yıl önce

     I can rework it a little. Do you want it to be more serious?

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     archestry

     • 9 yıl önce

     Comic look is coming from the colors and man face, i can make it somehow more realistic.

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  Zhoana

  • 9 yıl önce

  #59
  
  This is the ideia coming abit more to life some details still need work, now it's just about the contrast and lights.
  You mention the lines look "too happy" would you like the overall image darker? lighter?
  I was going to add the shadow men walking into the shadow of that balcony. Main character probably a bit behind watching.
  
  Since it's your story tell me what you think? Does it match what your looking for?

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  Yarışma Sahibi

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  #56 and #57 I have left you a private message, please check it out and confirm you can read it as sometimes it disappear.

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     archestry

     • 9 yıl önce

     I have read it. Thanks.

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  MajdGH

  • 9 yıl önce

  Please check #53 #54 #55 , basically the same idea but differences in the background.
  The idea is an undefined entity representing paranoia or maybe the fear in the heart of the main character.
  Also , it has the shape of a vampire/monster as you described in Brief and it has the eyes of a dragonfly as this could make it really very scary and it would see a lot more (in the mind of the reader who connects his imagination with this cover) the soul of "the machinist" artwork as i am a very big fan of that artwork.
  I don't know if your book has anything to do with the diabolic ideas so we can erase the satanic star on the monster's head if it was not needed.
  I hope you like it and the background can be changed as desired...i gave you (Full darkness-Empty street-Painted wall)

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     MajdGH

     • 9 yıl önce

     Don't worry it is ok , i understand all that and i just misunderstood the idea of the book.

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     mobyartist2

     • 9 yıl önce

     Hi.... Please reviw my design #57
     
     Thanks and Best Regards,
     mobyartist

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  Yarışma Sahibi

  • 9 yıl önce

  IMPORTANT NOTICE: I see that private comments are often not working properly, I'll leave my opinion here publicly then.
  
  #48 very interesting idea, i wont say anything and let you develop it your own
  #52 cool concept and location, please describe your image, why white man is flat?
  #50 improvement respect previous image, the red-death is however not relevant for this story.
  #49 unfinished and "empty" art, concept is not properly developed, death is not relevant
  #51 image not relevant, where did you take the woman face and profile? Please explain

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  Yarışma Sahibi

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  #46 quattro stelle temporanee, ci voglio pensare su, anche per questo ti ho lasciato un messaggio privato

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  Yarışma Sahibi

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  #47 so che il disegno in se merita più di 3 stelle, leggi il messaggio privato relativo.

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  Yarışma Sahibi

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  #45 too many not related elements, the castle, hodded fidure, the scythe.
  
  IMPORTANT: dear artists, please explain your artwork when submitting it, explain your interpretation!

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  umby

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  #46 #47

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  Yarışma Sahibi

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  dear artists, please consider this when you come to design your interpretation: the horror the main character experience is just a way to manifest something hidden within him, something he did, a sin he is unable to admit to himself in first. Also consider the phychological aspect of the novel, as it is more relevant respect real horro presence in the cover.
  
  Tonight I'll make some pictures of the current environment, where the story takes place.

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     Yarışma Sahibi

     • 9 yıl önce

     hello, sent you a private message, have you read it?

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     MrGuder

     • 9 yıl önce

     Looking for il Buio. Ma fuori. :) https://maps.google.com/maps?q=Tempio+Malatestiano,+Via+Quattro+novembre,+Rimini,+RN,+Italia&hl=it&ll=44.059747,12.569827&spn=0.000732,0.001124&sll=44.824708,12.86499&sspn=2.929877,4.603271&oq=Tempio+Malatestiano+Italia&hq=Tempio+Malatestiano,&hnear=Via+Quattro+novembre,+Rimini,+Italia&t=m&z=19&layer=c&cbll=44.059817,12.569763&panoid=WI46qrA6OUJmm2MVzNtcww&cbp=12,105.38,,0,-10.6

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  Yarışma Sahibi

  • 9 yıl önce

  #44 image comes from "Killer is Dead" videogame for PS3, also biotico/robotic arm is totally unrelevant.
  
  author has been reported and banned from contest.

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     umby

     • 9 yıl önce

     Incredibile, senza dignità! ...domani o al massimo dopo domani dovrei riuscire a postarti un'altra copertina..sto portando avanti anche altre cose

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  Yarışma Sahibi

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  #41 left you a private notice

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  Yarışma Sahibi

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  #42 and #43 there is too much blood/gore and man looks nearly happy more than worried to me.

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  Yarışma Sahibi

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  #40 very interesting concept art (hand picture) I have left you a private note in regards, please check it out

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  Yarışma Sahibi

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  #39 please post only front cover, quote source for photo used and do not recycle other books covers or barcodes

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  Yarışma Sahibi

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  #38 photo seems taken from some game/movie, face has some sign of corruption. The overall idea may be good but the shadow figure is a little too reductive, simplistic and somewhat inaccurate.
  
  ATTENTION: While using photo for your cover always specify where it comes from, or i'll be unable to accept it.

  • 9 yıl önce
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     saniaarif21

     • 9 yıl önce

     Image source
     http://www.flickr.com/photos/masterofmadness/4541778430/
     http://wall.alphacoders.com/big.php?i=381552

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     Yarışma Sahibi

     • 9 yıl önce

     thank you for clarification, if you want to improve your image please refer to my post below

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  Yarışma Sahibi

  • 9 yıl önce

  EVALUATION PARAMETERS (stars per feature):
  1.5 stars for main character shaken expression, as in #15 and #26
  1.5 stars for monster disturbing presence, horror must be allusive, as in #33 and #26
  1.0 star for the environment, the background of the scene, as in #7 , #30 , #26 and #33
  1.0 star based on the interpretation of previous elements and image quality of the cover

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     Yarışma Sahibi

     • 9 yıl önce

     * stars value is max score each feature will award, its not a switch but a 0.0 to X.X value range

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  Yarışma Sahibi

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  #37 very nice idea dropping out of the cam the monster hairs, monster looks more like a cat/wolf, this time 2nd image looks better than just pencil, also cool location and interpretation of character job, we have lost the "disturbed" position of previous picture

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  Yarışma Sahibi

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  #36 again watermark, not needed descriptive text, however funny interpretation but would be good for humor

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  Yarışma Sahibi

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  #35 there is a watermark and bottom descriptive text, where is teh photo from?

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  umby

  • 9 yıl önce

  #37 trovi anche altre due versioni della copertina

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  Yarışma Sahibi

  • 9 yıl önce

  BOOK LOCATIONS:
  
  I was unable to take self made photo due to cold and weather conditions, so I have searched the web for a few relevant locations, I will eventually be able to take my own I'll publishe them here later. I'll be splitting the message ad charachers are limited to 1000:

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  Yarışma Sahibi

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  http://www.abcvacanze.it/le-chiese-di-rimini/chiesa-dei-paolotti-rimini.jpg
  one church, there V. firstly meets the monster, the little chapel at night project a shadow in diagonal, there the monster "vanished" to reappear outside of the shadow, most of the locations were visited during night times.
  
  http://www.abcvacanze.it/rimini/immagine2.jpg
  One of main town square, tents and carousel are not stable, behind the carousel you can see the chapel of the previous image

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  Yarışma Sahibi

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  http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/1/11/Tempio_Malatestiano_Rimini.jpg
  town cathedral, there V. see the monster walking on its front wall like a reptile, as a geko yould do
  
  http://www.fotoeweb.it/rimini/FotoRimini/Rimini%20Castello%20Malatestiano%20ingresso.jpg
  town castle, another location, at night time and full size looks better, could not find proper photo

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  Yarışma Sahibi

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  http://static.riviera.rimini.it/tl_files/gallerie/pop/arco-augusto2.tif.jpg
  August arch, generally it is seen from the other side but could not find a better image
  
  http://www2.stile.it/fnts/stile/immagini/resized/r/i/rimini-ponte-romano-di-notte_49866276_650x365.jpg
  Tiberio town bridge, the arch is at the very end of the street, it is somewhat long and will cross the square above

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  Yarışma Sahibi

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  #34 please remember the thunbnail size, as this is what the customers will see while browsing on Kindle store.

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  Yarışma Sahibi

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  #33 concept is good but the sleeping figure seems a little too young to be a man, thoughts?

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  1. 
     Yarışma Sahibi

     • 9 yıl önce

     perhaps text is a little to dark and doesnt stand above such gray, I would use a brighter red or a different color

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     archestry

     • 9 yıl önce

     Ok i have read your your privat message and got all your points thank you.

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  Yarışma Sahibi

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  #32 it seems a photo scraped by other media, can you please confirm its source?

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  Yarışma Sahibi

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  * * * ATTENTION: Definitive Title: Il Buio Dentro * * *
  This will be the definitive title, so please use it on text layer, it wont be changed, so use it with confidence. thank you.
  
  ABOUT STARS RATING:
  * * * * art is very relevant with the book and also has a good drawing
  * * * art is somewhat relevant, but might be improved to make it more pertinent
  * * some elements of the cover are too different respect the book style

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  Yarışma Sahibi

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  #22 is again copyrighted image: http://www.joabhomearts.com/show.php?por_id=5615

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  Yarışma Sahibi

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  #4 and #5 are also copyrighted images: http://www.goodreads.com/book/show/18377563-a-warm-breath-kindle-single

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