Child Paying Adult

  • Durum: Closed
  • Ödül: $30
  • Alınan Girdiler: 24
  • Kazanan Girdiler: raycboston

Yarışma Özeti

Want a drawing of a very unhappy child paying a very happy adult some money, with a plane in the background.

Background: It's cheaper for airlines to transport children (lighter) than adults (heavier), as there are less fuel costs involved in transporting lighter people, yet the price is the same, so children are effectively cross-subsidising adults.

I want to illustrate this with a drawing, which will be published on [url removed, login to view] (our website)

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  • loliria
    loliria
    • 4 yıl önce

    Good day Mr. Capetownrob, sir. I would highly appreciate it if you could comment, critique, and rate on my entry #21. Please and thank you sir. :)

    • 4 yıl önce
  • JTGDesign
    JTGDesign
    • 4 yıl önce

    Please comment and rate #20 - thank you. www.JTGDesign.com

    • 4 yıl önce
  • raycboston
    raycboston
    • 4 yıl önce

    hi,
    please check out entry #17

    • 4 yıl önce
    1. capetownrob
      Yarışma Sahibi
      • 4 yıl önce

      Love it, thanks!

      • 4 yıl önce
  • ruralboy
    ruralboy
    • 4 yıl önce

    thanks for comment, plz check #19 hope you like it (not 18). regards

    • 4 yıl önce
    1. capetownrob
      Yarışma Sahibi
      • 4 yıl önce

      I LOVE the way you've stuffed the suitcase full of money! Also, I prefer the style of the plane to #17. BUT #17 has a better looking adult. The mouth of the adult in #17 looks a bit weird.

      • 4 yıl önce
  • nilankohalder
    nilankohalder
    • 4 yıl önce

    The biggest concern is that - none of these are any freelancer's creation. Just ready made vectors put together.

    • 4 yıl önce
    1. alienatics
      alienatics
      • 4 yıl önce

      I have the whole project starting from my pencil sketch to final shadings in different layers....so little thinking before spamming may help you in future.

      • 4 yıl önce
    2. alienatics
      alienatics
      • 4 yıl önce

      and there are plenty of free to use items available,they are made to help your creation,but if you have nothing of your own there then its different.

      • 4 yıl önce
  • capetownrob
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 4 yıl önce

    #16 and #14 are my joint favourites. What I prefer about #14 is that the express on the adult's face comes through larger (as he's got a larger face) and fiercer. #16 has a slightly clearer expression of sadness on the child's face.

    • 4 yıl önce
  • capetownrob
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 4 yıl önce

    #14 - please place on a white background, not grey

    • 4 yıl önce
  • ruralboy
    ruralboy
    • 4 yıl önce

    thanks, check my new entry #12

    • 4 yıl önce
    1. capetownrob
      Yarışma Sahibi
      • 4 yıl önce

      feedback above

      • 4 yıl önce
  • raycboston
    raycboston
    • 4 yıl önce

    hi,
    please checkout entry #11
    regards

    • 4 yıl önce
    1. capetownrob
      Yarışma Sahibi
      • 4 yıl önce

      I like the addition of the suitcase, but not the airport buildings in the background...they're an odd shape and drown out the message.

      • 4 yıl önce
  • ruralboy
    ruralboy
    • 4 yıl önce

    sir, in 12 the adult seem greedy but the others seem angry or happy. so hope you like most #12

    • 4 yıl önce
    1. capetownrob
      Yarışma Sahibi
      • 4 yıl önce

      #12 The money is too small, the airport buildings are a weird shape. In terms of the expression of the adult, I agree, I like that aspect the 2nd most after #3

      • 4 yıl önce
  • capetownrob
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 4 yıl önce

    #13 I quite like! It's the most interesting angle of the plane so far, and includes the airport buildings in the best way so far (ie small). There are 2 ways it can be improved: (a) get an evil grin like #11, and (b) there's not enough contrast in the colours of the people and the background.

    • 4 yıl önce
  • ruralboy
    ruralboy
    • 4 yıl önce

    plz check #10

    • 4 yıl önce
    1. capetownrob
      Yarışma Sahibi
      • 4 yıl önce

      Love it man, especially the suitcase. BUT in #3 it's clearer that the money is being paid by the child to the man - in yours it's not 100% clear who is paying who, as they both hold cash.

      • 4 yıl önce
  • capetownrob
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 4 yıl önce

    I like the airport behind #8, but the people don't have as much prominence as #3

    • 4 yıl önce
  • capetownrob
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 4 yıl önce

    #9 Doesn't have as much weight difference between the 2 as #3, and the adult doesn't have as evil a grin

    • 4 yıl önce
  • capetownrob
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 4 yıl önce

    #6 What I like about it is that it's clearer that the kid is unhappy than it is in #3. BUT I don't like the blue shading around the plane, and the adult doesn't come across as large as in #3, and doesn't have as evil a grin - so I still prefer #3.

    • 4 yıl önce
  • ganadev
    ganadev
    • 4 yıl önce

    do you mind adding a new character into the picture to give a better implementation of the idea

    • 4 yıl önce
    1. capetownrob
      Yarışma Sahibi
      • 4 yıl önce

      I'd be interested to see what you have in mind

      • 4 yıl önce
  • raycboston
    raycboston
    • 4 yıl önce

    please check entry #3.
    regards

    • 4 yıl önce
    1. capetownrob
      Yarışma Sahibi
      • 4 yıl önce

      Replied to #4 below.

      • 4 yıl önce
    2. raycboston
      raycboston
      • 4 yıl önce

      Hi capetownrob,
      I'm glad that you liked my entry.
      Thanks.
      Best Regards

      • 4 yıl önce
  • capetownrob
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 4 yıl önce

    It's important to have the adult look much bigger, to emphasise the weight difference (an idea is to place them onto a seesaw like scale, to emphasise the weight difference)

    • 4 yıl önce
  • brandonLee24
    brandonLee24
    • 4 yıl önce

    Please feedback on #4

    • 4 yıl önce
    1. capetownrob
      Yarışma Sahibi
      • 4 yıl önce

      I like #4, it's my 2nd favourite after #3. A few things: (1) the buildings in the background are unnecessary noise. (2) I'd prefer a fatter adult, (3) I'd prefer a bigger plane

      • 4 yıl önce
  • capetownrob
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 4 yıl önce

    The adult should be an adult passenger, shouldn't be wearing a pilot's hat.

    • 4 yıl önce
  • capetownrob
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 4 yıl önce

    Epidemiological - I can't see that that's a child

    • 4 yıl önce

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