Content Writing for Medical Office Brochure

  • Durum: Closed
  • Ödül: $50
  • Alınan Girdiler: 19
  • Kazanan Girdiler: gailwesterfield

Yarışma Özeti

I will provide a version of the text I want on a brochure about medical office services.
We want the text modified for clarity, grammar and most important to make clients want to buy the services.
Thank you

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  • gailwesterfield
    gailwesterfield
    • 3 yıl önce

    Hi! You sent me a message about further work, but I can't find it anywhere on my messages, nor can I figure out how to communicate with you! Could you resend it through the Freelancer PM?

    • 3 yıl önce
  • stranger0090
    stranger0090
    • 3 yıl önce

    Hello. Still waiting for the result :) have you selected?

    • 3 yıl önce
  • stranger0090
    stranger0090
    • 3 yıl önce

    Have you seen all the entries? Mine is #2. I did it and hopefully you will like my work. Thanks

    • 3 yıl önce
  • lzuccari
    lzuccari
    • 3 yıl önce

    One issue for me was the fact that this will come from a medical office, and must inspire confidence in the reader. It needs to engage the reader and make them want to enroll in one of your plans, BUT it is essential that its tone is professional and medically reliable. If it reads like an infomercial, it is going to turn people off and make you sound like a huckster, instead of a medical professional who provides expert, clinically proven treatment as well as providing an extra measure of service, something that appeals to the patient's desire to be his/her own advocate. It's a bit tricky, not like writing copy to sell the latest "miraculous" diet supplement. That is why I chose to appeal to the patient's desire to be a "partner" with his doctor, still receiving reliable medical management of his health while maintaining an active role in his own regimen. Thanks for your input.

    • 3 yıl önce
  • calinvpop
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 3 yıl önce

    Some are ok though

    • 3 yıl önce
  • calinvpop
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 3 yıl önce

    I am looking at all of them. The problem is that I wanted to make things easy for me and choose the best one. For me to constantly give feedback and correct every one of 28 entries is a chore I am not willing to get into as it takes too much effort and the point was to make my life easier. Some are better some are not and will likely choose one soon, however I feel too many editors just changed the grammar and style and have been doing a poor copywriting job. In other words the text is correct but dull, and boring to read.

    • 3 yıl önce
  • SmaSimSolutions
    SmaSimSolutions
    • 3 yıl önce

    hi calinvpop, please take a look at entry #27 .

    • 3 yıl önce
  • lzuccari
    lzuccari
    • 3 yıl önce

    So, do I understand you to say that none of these entries are satisfactory for your purposes?

    • 3 yıl önce
  • calinvpop
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 3 yıl önce

    Let me be very clear here! This was a contest for COPYWRITERS, not for editors, proofreaders, freelancers, etc. The purpose is to be able to captivate, attract clients and make them ready to buy.
    Good wording and grammar are a good start but absolutely not enough.

    • 3 yıl önce
  • ezzhoda
    ezzhoda
    • 3 yıl önce

    Hello,

    I am really interested in the job. I've been working as a freelancer for over 5 years now and have done previous similar projects. Let me know when I can start.
    Looking forward to your reply :)


    Thanks,

    Hoda

    • 3 yıl önce
  • SmaSimSolutions
    SmaSimSolutions
    • 3 yıl önce

    Hello, kindly review entry #27
    I have reduced the word count by 50 words, in order to fit into 1 page brochure. current word count is 450 from the original 500 odd words.i have used positive tone to present the content in users perspective. standard ezine guidelines were followed while working on this article. for any modifications, send me a private message. feel free to see my past work, 5 star rated award winning article on finance. https://www.freelancer.in/contest/Write-a-blog-on-finance-48978-byentry-2143729.html
    https://www.freelancer.in/contest/Write-a-blog-on-finance-48978-byentry-2143752.html

    • 3 yıl önce
  • pebblessantos
    pebblessantos
    • 3 yıl önce

    Why can't I submit my entry?

    • 3 yıl önce
  • rishini
    rishini
    • 3 yıl önce

    can you provide us with more information about the services provided by these health care packages. The information provided in the article is very vague and not enough to arouse the interest of the reader and actually convince them to buy the product. So let us know, what is offered by each package?, what is the difference between these packages? and why should we buy it?

    • 3 yıl önce
  • stranger0090
    stranger0090
    • 3 yıl önce

    Greetings, I am waiting for your decision. I have submitted the edited file. Thanks

    • 3 yıl önce
  • stranger0090
    stranger0090
    • 3 yıl önce

    Waiting for your verdict. Thanks

    • 3 yıl önce
  • lzuccari
    lzuccari
    • 3 yıl önce

    Done and submitted. Good luck finding your winner!!

    • 3 yıl önce
  • cattaaa
    cattaaa
    • 3 yıl önce

    I should have a version available within 24 - 36 hours.

    • 3 yıl önce
  • stranger0090
    stranger0090
    • 3 yıl önce

    Document Submitted. Waiting for your decision now. Thanks

    • 3 yıl önce
  • lzuccari
    lzuccari
    • 3 yıl önce

    Just saw your contest and this is my speciality. I will post an entry tomorrow. Thanks, Luanne

    • 3 yıl önce
  • doru1961
    doru1961
    • 3 yıl önce

    Can I bid for this project?

    • 3 yıl önce
  • stranger0090
    stranger0090
    • 3 yıl önce

    I am working on the doc. now. Thanks

    • 3 yıl önce

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