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Hi. I create the animation video for you on the previous contest page. I noticed that u edited in the script I previously done, this is great. I purchased the new voice over and I edited in the animation video. Since not allowed to attach videos here on this contest, so I uploaded the video to youtube with a small protection but the final video will be in mp4 format and in HD. This is the link for the video: www.youtube.com/watch?v=OtjiffLHtLs&feature=youtu.be I hope you will like it and I am waiting for your feedback.

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  • cameronellis93
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 9 yıl önce

    Hi Rami I am unsure of how to invite you to the project, but I have just posted it, the name of the project is "Voice Over for Rewire," the video is no more than a minute, 50 seconds. Look forward to accepted you for the project so we can get this done as soon as possible

    • 9 yıl önce
  • OhRami
    OhRami
    • 9 yıl önce

    sure no problem

    • 9 yıl önce
  • cameronellis93
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 9 yıl önce

    Hi Rami, the video animation is almost finished and shortly I will create a project and invite you for the voice over to be done, if you still can do that for us? Thanks

    • 9 yıl önce
  • OhRami
    OhRami
    • 10 yıl önce

    i can not share the contact since he only create audios for some specific people since he do this to earn some extra money. what i can do is you can provide me the script and I can buy it for you. his price is $35 per minute . and the way I can get payed if you want his voice over for the video is by creating a project on freelancer.com and invite me for it so I can receive the amount. thx

    • 10 yıl önce
  • cameronellis93
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 10 yıl önce

    Hi Rami, I really like the voice over you used for your video, is there any way you could let me know which voiceover that is or where I can find that ? Thanks so much

    • 10 yıl önce
  • OhRami
    OhRami
    • 10 yıl önce

    if*

    • 10 yıl önce
  • OhRami
    OhRami
    • 10 yıl önce

    thank you and i am at your service i had the chance to win this contest.

    • 10 yıl önce
  • cameronellis93
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 10 yıl önce

    Ok, I understand and will get make to you if the other animation doesn't turn out any better than what you have submitted so far

    • 10 yıl önce
  • OhRami
    OhRami
    • 10 yıl önce

    Hi. thanks for considering me however, i have lot of projects and as is the case with other contests that I done, after being awarded the contest, I do the edits for the video since the contest money are not automatically released after being awarded, there are like 15 days before they are release which means there are plenty of time for edits. Plus the contest prize is low considering an animation video which takes lot of time and work. If someone else will win this contest, that is okay cause this is the beauty of contest that anyone can win. For me, any edits are done after begin awarded and u can check my freelancer profile which is 5 stars and done 53 projects till today on that site so I do not leave my clients behind. Thank you for your understanding.

    • 10 yıl önce
  • cameronellis93
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 10 yıl önce

    I can assure you that if the changes are made in the manner that I have written previously, you will be the contest winner. Please reassess the situation and make the changes to solidify yourself as the contest winner. If you do not wish to do this, please let me know and we will have to wait and see until the 5 days is up and see whether any of the other entries have come up to par or not...Thank you

    • 10 yıl önce
  • cameronellis93
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 10 yıl önce

    Please make the changes that can fit with your animation software in that case. There has been one other entry which has the potential to win this contest, although not as good as your animation, he is working on making it better and doing the changes we give him. Therefore, for us to choose you as the contest winner, we either need to see the changes are being made and the video is getting better, or you will have to take the risk that the other animation does not end up being better than the one you have submitted, as I have 5 days still left to choose a winner. We do want to move forward with you as you helped sculpt the script so that has not been forgotten, but we just need to be sure we end up with a video that we can use for our intended purposes.

    • 10 yıl önce
  • OhRami
    OhRami
    • 10 yıl önce

    Hi. I have read the edits. I can not create it the same, but i can edit it in a way that can fit with my animation software. I am sure we can find a way to fix it in a way that will looks nice too. but i do not do any edits from animation and voice over unless i was awarded the contest. thx for ur understanding

    • 10 yıl önce
  • cameronellis93
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 10 yıl önce

    Thank you and look forward to seeing the updated video !

    • 10 yıl önce
  • cameronellis93
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 10 yıl önce

    Final Scene (Rewire, changing the..”): Lets change the script on this last scene to say “Rewire, putting you in control of what you receive on your phone or computer. This could change the 600 billion dollar advertising industry forever.” Lets display a phone with the Rewire icon and logo inside where the robot is and get rid of the robot. Then on the right side of the screen have the ‘Available on App Store’ Icon at the top and ‘Available on Google Play’ icon underneath, not the icons we have there now, the ones that have that text in them. Then have the website written underneath that. Then when “600 billion” is said on the script, lets have that number appear underneath written as “$600,000,000,000”

    • 10 yıl önce
  • cameronellis93
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 10 yıl önce

    Sixth Scene (“and Rewire to the”): Can we show the screen split in two, down the middle just like on the third scene. On the girl’s side could we have her at a mall with shopping bags of clothes, and for the guy’s scene could we have him with outside with new golf clubs and a new car.

    • 10 yıl önce
  • cameronellis93
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 10 yıl önce

    Third Scene (“user filter…”): Lets have the robot not appear in this scene. Lets have it say “Clothing” for the girls thought bubble, and have it says ‘Electronics’ for the guys thought bubble. Also lets have the guy holding a smartphone not a clipboard.

    Fourth Scene (“And business can…”): In the video at this link: http://vimeo.com/94259484 you see it has people scrolling on the computer to show the people being targeted, can we display something that gets this point across on the computer screen. Also on the iPad, the Rewire icon seems to be stretched too wide and is no longer square shaped, lets get that to be the right shape.

    Fifth scene (“With Rewire app..”): Get rid of the robot guy scene holding his hand out. Can we display someone disconnecting a plug that turns off all the current advertising? So we could have a computer screen showing a bunch of pop ups on the screen, then someone pulling the plug out of the wall which shut the advertising off.

    • 10 yıl önce
  • cameronellis93
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 10 yıl önce

    Hi Rami, could you please make the following changes and then message the link to the youtube video once those changes are done, we just want to see that the changes we want done will be done prior to choosing a winner but at this point your animation is the likely winner, given the changes we need done are made.

    First Scene (“Constantly bombarded…”): Where the question mark pops up with the two mail letters, we want to display computer advertisement pops up there instead of the question mark and letter. Please view this link to see what kind of pops up they used for the beginning of their video: http://vimeo.com/94259484 If we could somehow show these pop ups as if they are coming out of the computer on the desk, that would be good.

    Second Scene (“Introducing the app, Rewire”): Could we have a iPhone appear with the background of the phone in that blue color with the icon and writing in white as it is in the phone.

    • 10 yıl önce
  • OhRami
    OhRami
    • 10 yıl önce

    Hi. I did not knew what exactly you mean. if you mean you like me to edit in the video. I can do that. since i guess now you know my animation style, so I can edit as much possible with it. We can communicate here for anything you may need since we can not chat outside of freelancer contest cause I received warning about closing my account if any other violation happen. so if you like to award me the contest, i be more than happy to edit in the video for you. thx

    • 10 yıl önce
  • cameronellis93
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 10 yıl önce

    Hi Rami, is there some way where I can give you some feedback during this last period of time before a contest winner must be chosen to see what the video with updates looks like?

    • 10 yıl önce
  • OhRami
    OhRami
    • 10 yıl önce

    I think that was not exact. Like at first I showed a person angry from lot of advertisement. then I showed a mix picture of 2 people who now receiving emails of what they really want, the girl want shopping and the boy wants fun at beach so they are happy and the robot with cables like attaching each person to what he needs. then I show the business person happy that he knows that his advertisement is reaching the exact person. that how it is.

    • 10 yıl önce
  • cameronellis93
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 10 yıl önce

    Hi there, the animation seems to be off topic from what we are trying to portray. We need it to follow what the script is saying as all the animations in the back just seem a bit random. If you could do it more focused on what the script is saying it would be good, thank you

    • 10 yıl önce

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