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I have written some content for my two-page brochure for my startup.
I want to edit/re-write that and make it more simple, concise and with more brevity.
Main objective is
1) to reduce number of words in the document/content.
2) to use simpler sentences.
3) to use good and professional vocabulary.
Content is divided mainly in:
1) What are we offering ?
2) Our Investing principals and risk management ?
3) How does it work and charges ?
4) Things included, freebies etc
5) About Us / Know your Partners
6) Let our numbers speak
Priority 1 - ABOUT US/Know your partners - want to make it more simple and concise, especially point 8 and partner-2. Please see attached file.
Any creative suggestion is welcomed. Also, please edit and format overall word document as well.
Fyi : Startup is into managing money for investment into stock market.