English Music/Vocal Composition for a poem
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- Ödül: $130
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- Kazanan: alex41203
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I need to get English music and vocal for one of my poems. It was a project initially. But thought a contest would be the best way.The poem may not have the standard song structure as each line has different amount of syllables. For more questions, contact- neethup.nandu@gmail.com.
Send entries to my email id or give me link to dropbox. Please note-- I not only need music but sing and record in the music that you have created for.
Given is the poem and the story:
Title-Nightmare of a mom
My kid with a doll slowly twiddles
Matching to a song from piano she diddles
She taps her little feet and turns around
She smiles and how it conquers I can't expound
Suddenly she grows and grows to a maiden!
My chick is now ready to fly with hopes laden
For a while, spots of blood appear in her frock
Fire of womanhood has sooted the crock
Though beauty boils over! See her cheeks blush
Bosoms rise in the youth which is lush
The floor suddenly cracks and widens the crack
She is still turning around not hearing the clack
I warn her but still she dances in crave
She turns, turns and slips into a deep grave
I can hear my heartbeats as I look inside
Hardly can see as darkness does hide
Smutty dogs carry flesh in their mouths so wild
Whom should I ask? Where are you my child?
Story-This is a fusion of a dream and reality which starts from the scene where a middle aged mom sitting on a chair in an evening and relaxing. She hears a piano music and when she looks she sees a doll which turns around. When she looks at that more, doll transforms to her daughter when she was a kid (3-4 yr old)playing or smiling. Suddenly she grows big and turns into a teenager.She dances and turns violently and doesn't hear her mom's warning.This is the crucial part of the song where the mood should dramatically change as here is the theme of nightmare comes. So it should create a fear too in listener. The teenage girl who is turning, turns so violently with expressions in her face and after the turn, the floor cracks and she herself and all the things in the room fall into that big grave like fissure which has formed in the room.
following lines depict this part:
"The floor suddenly cracks and widens the crack
She is still turning around not hearing the clack
I warn her but still she dances in crave
She turns, turns and slips into a deep grave"--These lines could be of a high pitch and a fearful tone.
The mom walks down to the darkness(into the fissure in the room) to find her daughter. But all she could see was one guy
who was walking out from darkness and when showed her girls photo and asked, he simply nods his head and walks away but with a cunning smile.Mom cries loudly(in mind. But the emotion is so high that this line requires a high pitch and high emotion). The whole song what I expect should be of a really catchy one which conveys strong emotions, nostalgia, fear and sadness.
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“He gave a dramatic and magical uplift to the poem by his music. Thanks”
neethupnandu, United States.
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