Colored Pass Sketch
Just did a quick color pass so you can see what it looks like, of course I can change the color of everything.
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Yarışma Sahibi - 8 yıl önce
3) The person looks pretty generic. See the entry by AHingley for an example of a character that I like better. But I like your strip thus far and you are definitely being considered.
- 8 yıl önce
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QFIdev
- 8 yıl önce
Well thank you so much unfortunately I'm gone the next couple of days which is why I worked crazy hard on it last night, but If I do win you can bet I will do all those changes! ( I hope I've been very accomodating so far ! ) I'll be keeping track : )
Also I can't see Ahingleys work, he sealed it! Lol but if you can screencapture it I can take a look at it and see how it looks on his or just use my own judgement. Thanks- 8 yıl önce
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QFIdev
- 8 yıl önce
Well thank you so much unfortunately I'm gone the next couple of days which is why I worked crazy hard on it last night, but If I do win you can bet I will do all those changes! ( I hope I've been very accomodating so far ! ) I'll be keeping track : )
- 8 yıl önce
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Yarışma Sahibi - 8 yıl önce
2) Remove the $ signs from the last panel. The feel of this shouldn't be too much like 'Gotcha!'. The idea is that this dog is actually going to impart wisdom to the world, not just take people's money with this clever trick.
- 8 yıl önce
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Yarışma Sahibi - 8 yıl önce
1) I would like to see these panels from a bit deeper perspective so we can see more of the area in front of the booth and on the sides. It seems like these panels are ZOOMED IN
- 8 yıl önce
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Yarışma Sahibi - 8 yıl önce
Wow, the color makes a BIG difference and looks much better.
- 8 yıl önce
