Logo needed for website/ business cards (Building Industry)

Durum: Closed
Ödül: $20
Alınan Girdiler: 11
Kazanan: primavaradin07

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Yarışma Sahibi
- 9 yıl önce
#45 Thanks for the entry, but the building and the roof are too complex. I do like the two colors that you used in the Building Marketing
- 9 yıl önce
Yarışma Sahibi
- 9 yıl önce
#36, #41 Thanks for the entry, but although the designs do have some unique parts, overall they are too complex and not obvious at first glance.
- 9 yıl önce
vsourse009
- 9 yıl önce
Please check #41 and provide feedback.
- 9 yıl önce
vsourse009
- 9 yıl önce
Please check #36 and provide feedback.
- 9 yıl önce
Yarışma Sahibi
- 9 yıl önce
#18 I like:
- the 3D feel, however, I think it would look better if the buildings had a shadow
- Font is nice
I don't like
- at first glance, the buildings to me looked like crystals :) Is there a way to make them clearer that they are buildings?

PS. I attached a new file with an idea of using BM to form a shape of a house (the house shape needs to be strengthened further in some way). Maybe you might be able to use something in that idea.
- 9 yıl önce
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1. Yarışma Sahibi
  - 9 yıl önce
  #26, #27, #28. I was trying to get the letters B&M to look like a house.
  If you look at #28, the edges of B and M form straight lines, which look like a roof. If you look on the example I sent, you see the M forming the Top of the roof with the top slanting both to the left and right.
  (BTW I used Font "Gabriola" for B and "Arabic Typesetting" for the M. The letter "B" in Gabriola didn't have foot at the bottom so it emphasises the roof more.)
  
  I was thinking that it might be possible to do things like the following:
  - The straight parts of B and M extended a "little" to make it more obvious that it's a roof
  - The colors of the letters be different at the top so that they looks like a triangle roof
  - additional line (ie roof) be added just above the letters to make it clear that it's a house
  - or some combination of them
  - 9 yıl önce
2. Yarışma Sahibi
  - 9 yıl önce
  In regards to some other points
  - I prefer the color of BM in #26
  - The background should be totally white, like in #26
  - Is it possible to add a little more shadow to #28 while still having a white background?
  - I like the green line under the BM like in #26
  - 9 yıl önce
Yarışma Sahibi
- 9 yıl önce
#25, The image is still too busy sorry.
#35 , This one is quite nice, because it's simpler, but for me if the B & M letters are used in the logo they need to tell a story and form some sort of building (or part of a building)
- 9 yıl önce
Yarışma Sahibi
- 9 yıl önce
#21, #22 Thanks for the entry, but the twin picks (I know they look like an M) don't fit the building theme.
- 9 yıl önce
ExpertDesignz
- 9 yıl önce
#21, #22 please send me feedback.
- 9 yıl önce
Yarışma Sahibi
- 9 yıl önce
#15 I prefer the colors in #17 compared to this one. Also the 3D effect is lost
- 9 yıl önce
Yarışma Sahibi
- 9 yıl önce
#17 Thanks for the entry
I like
- the 3D effect
- The fonts and colors used
I don't like
- it's enclosed in a shield area. I prefer the graphic to be open like in #18
- 9 yıl önce
Yarışma Sahibi
- 9 yıl önce
#13 I like the design, but the green buildings don't really look like a B. If they did, I think it would make the BM logo more meaningful.
- 9 yıl önce
Yarışma Sahibi
- 9 yıl önce
#16 Thanks for using my new attachment, but I was thinking that the BM needs to be modified a little to highlight that it represents a building and not just 2 letters.

Also, I prefer the font that you used for "building Marketing" on #11
- 9 yıl önce
Yarışma Sahibi
- 9 yıl önce
#12, #14
Like - I think I prefer Blue/Green instead of Red/Black. Don't like the Black
Don't Like - The BM logo. See comment for #11
- 9 yıl önce
Yarışma Sahibi
- 9 yıl önce
#11 I like the font of "Building Marketing" but the BM logo doesn't look right. It's virtually the same as I had in the original attachment that I wasn't happy with.
- 9 yıl önce
Yarışma Sahibi
- 9 yıl önce
Hi All,
I have just uploaded another idea for the basis of the BM logo for you to consider in your designs. It was created using Word's WordArt.
- 9 yıl önce
Yarışma Sahibi
- 9 yıl önce
#10 Thanks for the entry
I like
- two layers of B and M
I don't like
- the format of the B and M. They look hand drawn
- 9 yıl önce
Yarışma Sahibi
- 9 yıl önce
#9 Thanks for the entry
I like
- extra line above the M
I don't like
- The B is hard to figure out
- needs more color
- 9 yıl önce
Yarışma Sahibi
- 9 yıl önce
#8 Thanks for the entry
- I like the broken eclipse, but
- the buildings make it hard to see the BM and make it too busy
- 9 yıl önce
Yarışma Sahibi
- 9 yıl önce
#5 Thanks for the entry, but
- BM logo is hard to see
- hard to read the "Building Marketing" text
- 9 yıl önce
Yarışma Sahibi
- 9 yıl önce
#4 Thanks for the entry
I like:
- The colors, blue and red make the logo eye catching and professional
- The word "Building" having the fading colors
- BM logo is raised a bit so it looks more 3D
I don't like:
- It's hard to see the M in the BM logo. I see it, but at first glance you just see the B
- more depth in the letters of "Building Marketing"
- 9 yıl önce
Yarışma Sahibi
- 9 yıl önce
#3 Thanks for the entry,
I like:
- the BM forming a building
I don't like:
- the BM is just made of straight lines, some curvature make it better
- The words Building Marketing are hard to read towards the ends
- 9 yıl önce
Yarışma Sahibi
- 9 yıl önce
#2 Thanks for the entry, but
- The BM logo is too flat (it needs some depth)
- the font needs more character
- 9 yıl önce
Yarışma Sahibi
- 9 yıl önce
#1 Thanks for the entry, but
- I can't see the M in the BM logo
- the font is too fancy, it needs to be more modern
- it's missing the Building / houses / construction theme
- 9 yıl önce
Yarışma Sahibi
- 9 yıl önce
#7 Thanks for the entry,
I like:
- The Logo design of the buildings, but need the BM
- the colors
- Font
I don't like
- I NEED the BM letters, because they will be used in later advertising
- 9 yıl önce