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Marketing Promo Video

Marketing Promo Video! Please inform if any changes you want to make it more lucrative! Hope you like my submission! Thank you!

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  • iftekharfahim007
    iftekharfahim007
    • 2 yıl önce

    noted sir....will update soon

    • 2 yıl önce
  • nextgenbot
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 yıl önce

    Copy writing changes (*missing scene 7, added*):


    SCENE 5:

    Exclusive deals and promos

    Get personalized offers based on your preferences


    SCENE 7:

    Like our service?

    Rate us and provide your feedback

    • 2 yıl önce
  • nextgenbot
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 yıl önce

    1. 0:08 Easy to use - slow down the mobile content video. stop before user type the words " how do i update membership"

    2. 0:13 Understanding your needs - the mobile video change to the part where user types "" how do i update membership".

    3. Quite hard to read orange text, try using black text ?

    4. 0:26 should stop at the Aspire Que , need not show click book now for this scene.

    5. 0:33 - need to show the full complete booking flow.

    6. Last scene: Just show "Powered by" then logo

    7. Can you try nicer iphone mock up, less squarish https://miro.medium.com/max/1000/1*24iqS01q4xyRdVsWN0rAqw.png

    8. Explore & Discover - keep it 1 line

    9. Need the survey part.

    10. 0:49 - can label the icons. Only 5 icons required.

    • 2 yıl önce