Professional company Bio and story needs writing.

  • Durum: Closed
  • Ödül: $50
  • Alınan Girdiler: 26
  • Kazanan Girdiler: GavinParish

Yarışma Özeti

We are a new company and I have just had a go at writing a bio for our website and possibly to be used in some local newspapers. I'm not a professional writer and would like help with making our bio shine.I have attached the bio, it is in Australian English, please submit all entries in Australian English. This is the first of many articles and we would like to find a winner to write for us into the future.

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“Gavin was very professional and easy to deal with, I highly recommened is work.”

Profil Görüntüsü vanuatuboy, Australia.

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  • ssethumadhavan
    ssethumadhavan
    • 3 yıl önce

    I think I just missed the deadline by a minute can I send the entry

    • 3 yıl önce
  • ssethumadhavan
    ssethumadhavan
    • 3 yıl önce

    @vantuaboy could you please provide me one message that your readers should carry forward after reading this article, I am planning to submit an article hence if you can do that it would be great for both of us. Else I will take the last paragraph of your article as the one, which I have noted for reference. "Aquamarine Personalised Home Care is committed to providing the highest quality non-medical home care services and treating all clients, of all ages with dignity and respect.

    • 3 yıl önce
  • ssethumadhavan
    ssethumadhavan
    • 3 yıl önce

    @Vanuatabosy, Could you please describe the relationship between Brian Farrel and Barry Holland. Are Brian and Barry completely un related? Could you let me know if Brian's Grand parents and Barry's father are connected.

    • 3 yıl önce
  • writersquality
    writersquality
    • 3 yıl önce

    @vanuatuboy: Dear Sir. Please have a look at entry#28. This is my third entry to contest. Hope this time I did it the way you asked. Please give valuable feedback.

    • 3 yıl önce
  • mynk16
    mynk16
    • 3 yıl önce

    @vanuatuboy

    Read out the Messages section of #24. It's very important.

    - Mayank

    • 3 yıl önce
  • vanuatuboy
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 3 yıl önce

    similar length, yes improve vocab, organised as you see best

    • 3 yıl önce
  • smshah
    smshah
    • 3 yıl önce

    Can you please specify exactly the requirements ?
    Should the length be the same as the sample or less?
    Should the vocabulary be improved? Should it be more formal or inclined towards informal language?
    Should the article be organised more or the same structure be used?

    • 3 yıl önce
  • vampyfree
    vampyfree
    • 3 yıl önce

    Hello vanuatuboy, i hope you can read in image submitted..or else i will send word file. :)

    • 3 yıl önce
  • writersquality
    writersquality
    • 3 yıl önce

    I'll submit my entry very soon.

    • 3 yıl önce
  • TheGuyver2040
    TheGuyver2040
    • 3 yıl önce

    Vanuatuboy,

    Would it be possible for you to guarantee payment?

    • 3 yıl önce
    1. vanuatuboy
      Yarışma Sahibi
      • 3 yıl önce

      Thank you

      • 3 yıl önce
    2. TheGuyver2040
      TheGuyver2040
      • 3 yıl önce

      Done. See entries #2 and #3.

      • 3 yıl önce
  • Reejurekh
    Reejurekh
    • 3 yıl önce

    Can you please guarantee the contest?

    • 3 yıl önce
    1. vanuatuboy
      Yarışma Sahibi
      • 3 yıl önce

      I just guaranteed it now, apologies I'm new to this.

      • 3 yıl önce
  • shashankroy
    shashankroy
    • 3 yıl önce

    I can do this . Please contact me

    • 3 yıl önce

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