Wanted: enticing tagline and product description for a snack

  • Durum: Closed
  • Ödül: $100
  • Alınan Girdiler: 16
  • Kazanan Girdiler: advoghado

Yarışma Özeti

Hello, we are 2 creators of a snack bar (yes, another snack bar on the market, healthy, glutenfree yada yada ... ;-)...) and we need qualified help from a great copy writer for our tagline and short product description that basically can sell the product by itself.

Please see attachment for full product description.

Name: we don't have the name yet, either. If you can come up with a name that we will end up using (after checking domain names, legal part, trademarks...) we will compensate that, of course. Feel free to mention if you have ideas for the name and how much you'd want to be compensated for that.

Further work: we will also need more copy for our website etc. so it would be great to find someone who'd we can continue with.

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Profil Görüntüsü miracle1212, Switzerland.

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  • creativeoncall
    creativeoncall
    • 2 yıl önce

    Miracle1212, get a professional to help you with this. At least choose one of the other starred entries. Or write it yourself – The file you attached to the contest brief was written much better than this winner. The title makes no sense in this context, yet still manages to be “icky.” The tagline was worn-out (and meaningless) 30 years ago. The description begins clumsily, then is as dry as a legal notice. All this would inspire someone to just take a vitamin instead.

    • 2 yıl önce
    1. haris100
      haris100
      • 2 yıl önce

      but tagline is good

      • 2 yıl önce
    2. creativeoncall
      creativeoncall
      • 2 yıl önce

      Nah, people in the demographic they say they are targeting roll their eyes at that kind of "adspeak." But that's a less negative reaction than they'll have to the name. Any English-speaking person seeing that will say, "Eeewww, Gross!"

      • 2 yıl önce
  • haris100
    haris100
    • 2 yıl önce

    Hello miracle, was about to upload some names, will you start a contest for names?

    • 2 yıl önce
  • haris100
    haris100
    • 2 yıl önce

    Can I only submit some names? and maybe a tagline..
    what are you willing to give only for the names? I will put that price on my entry.

    • 2 yıl önce
  • Ranjit00
    Ranjit00
    • 2 yıl önce

    #71 .

    • 2 yıl önce
  • optimizedimage
    optimizedimage
    • 2 yıl önce

    How do you want to handle the name suggestion? Got a great one and it ties into the tagline and product description.

    • 2 yıl önce
    1. optimizedimage
      optimizedimage
      • 2 yıl önce

      Went ahead and submitted the name idea because everything else falls out of that.

      • 2 yıl önce
  • miracle1212
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 yıl önce

    guys, please read the briefing: it says "no use of the word healthy"...!

    • 2 yıl önce
  • MrsRobeson
    MrsRobeson
    • 2 yıl önce

    I am unable to post in the entry my idea of your product, why not???

    • 2 yıl önce
    1. miracle1212
      Yarışma Sahibi
      • 2 yıl önce

      I don't know, please ask Freelancer.com

      • 2 yıl önce

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