Write/edit the mission statement of our new trading company

  • Durum: Closed
  • Ödül: €30
  • Alınan Girdiler: 31
  • Kazanan: HKPatel7

Yarışma Özeti

We have a new trading company and require a mission statement for it. The mission statement should emphasize that we use the latest technology and modeling techniques to invest, and put time and effort in continuously improving our employees.

An initial mission statement, which can be slightly changed or completely re-written if necessary (emphasizes social use and use for others too much, we are aiming to change this statement to implicit):

“At Causality Group we work for improving lives of people. We know this is a big statement for an investment firm, but it speaks for the awareness that continuously growing our people, working towards more efficient mathematical modeling techniques, investing into next generation hardware and advancing open-source software we positively impact our environment. We are not only improving the lives of our employees and investors, but also help users of information technology and our counterparties who chose to trade with us in the global markets. At the same time we allocate capital to companies who we believe to have the talent and commitment to turn it into greater use for society.”

Second version of mission statement (emphasizes social use and use for others less, we are aiming to change this statement to even more implicit):

“At Causality Group we have passion to implement new technologies and quantitative methods to simplify the investment process. Automation of the whole investment process does not only reduce the amount of manual labour required, but increases transparency and allows us to look deeper using ideas borrowed from machine learning, more thorough testing of our ideas and more sincere forecasts of strategy returns.

While our primary aim is to benefit our investors and employees, we also care about our surroundings. By continuously engaging our people in passionate activities of life, working towards more efficient mathematical modeling techniques, investing into next generation hardware and advancing open-source software we also help users of information technology and support our counterparties who chose to trade with us in the global markets. At the same time we allocate capital to companies who we believe to have the talent and commitment to turn it into great business.”

We would like the statement to develop in a direction where we describe what we do, and allow the reader to develop a feeling about whether this is useful for society (or not). Also, we aim at hiring passionate employees, as we all are.

The final result can also be longer or shorter than the example above.

The mission statement will be part of our website.

You can also have a look at ourcorporate identity competition to have a better idea of who we are:

- identity at: https://www.freelancer.com/contest/Develop-a-Corporate-Identity-for-the-trading-firm-Causality-SL-262752.html

Our possible company slogans are:
- Quant | People | Technology
- Thinking quantitative -- by usafiqubal

Tavsiye Edilen Beceriler

İşveren Geribildirimi

“When updating our mission statement, HKPatel7 both understood our vision at our company and showed used a corporate conform language.”

Profil Görüntüsü CasualitySL, Hungary.

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  • CasualitySL
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 yıl önce

    Dear Contestants, thank you for your patience! I have been indeed too busy with looking at other projects in our branding. I'm choosing HKPatel7 as a winner as I believe he combined a good understanding of our vision with a high / corporate style of English. Hope that we can work together in the future, Mark

    • 2 yıl önce
    1. HKPatel7
      HKPatel7
      • 2 yıl önce

      Hi, Mark; thanks for awarding me the contest and thanks to everyone else who participated . I look forward to working with you again in the future for any long or short term projects, so please feel free to message me. Thanks again.

      • 2 yıl önce
  • matama
    matama
    • 2 yıl önce

    Hi, please do not forget to rate my entry #36

    • 2 yıl önce
  • mehfilhathi
    mehfilhathi
    • 2 yıl önce

    #33, sir. It seems that you haven't considered my entry. Please, have a look, sir, and give me feedback.

    • 2 yıl önce
  • CasualitySL
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 yıl önce

    Hi, thank you for your patience. I'm going to have a look at all candidates, but need to sort out the other competitions too.

    Can anyone advise on how I can get an invoice out of this competition?

    Thanks

    • 2 yıl önce
    1. HKPatel7
      HKPatel7
      • 2 yıl önce

      Hey CasualitySL, you can go to https://www.freelancer.ca/support, scroll down to the bottom and choose the Chat Now option to get live support from one of the staff. But I think when you award a contest, you can go to the Finances tab at the top of the webpage, choose Transaction History from the list, and it has an option for Invoices which you can choose. I've never done this because I've never hosted a contest, but to keep track of any financial stuff you can just choose the "All Transactions" tab, select +Export Transactions, and choose a PDF or CSV format, then download. Now you have a financial transactions document from Freelancer.

      • 2 yıl önce
    2. matama
      matama
      • 2 yıl önce

      Hi, please rate my entry #36?

      • 2 yıl önce
  • IWSDirector
    IWSDirector
    • 2 yıl önce

    Hi, any feedback on entry #35 ? Thanks.

    • 2 yıl önce
  • matama
    matama
    • 2 yıl önce

    Hi, please rate my entry #36

    • 2 yıl önce
  • mehfilhathi
    mehfilhathi
    • 2 yıl önce

    #32, sir. Please, give me feedback. thank you.

    • 2 yıl önce
  • HKPatel7
    HKPatel7
    • 2 yıl önce

    Please review entry #30. It has all the changes you requested.

    • 2 yıl önce
  • HKPatel7
    HKPatel7
    • 2 yıl önce

    Please review entry #29. It combines the two mission statements you gave and balances their main points.

    • 2 yıl önce
  • Jayne Austin
    Jayne Austin
    • 2 yıl önce

    Kindly rate my entry #24 . Thanks

    • 2 yıl önce
  • keziahmalcolm
    keziahmalcolm
    • 2 yıl önce

    #23. I think you will find it impacting. It is short and states the mission clearly.

    • 2 yıl önce
  • CasualitySL
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 2 yıl önce

    Anyone knows similar tools to "www.grammarly.com"? They correct 250 types of writing issues like wordiness, word choice, basic punctuation, preposition use.

    • 2 yıl önce
    1. CasualitySL
      Yarışma Sahibi
      • 2 yıl önce

      Thanks! Tried it, no real mistakes in the original slogan :) Grammarly has pointed out plenty of style errors. Maybe I'll have to pay ;-)

      • 2 yıl önce
    2. ambreen678
      ambreen678
      • 2 yıl önce

      Sir, kindly check entry #18.

      • 2 yıl önce
  • vinita1804
    vinita1804
    • 2 yıl önce

    Hi...I wanted to know which type of file is being accepted here - I have already written the mission statement but am unable to upload it here. Please help - thanks, regards...

    • 2 yıl önce
    1. harsha442
      harsha442
      • 2 yıl önce

      @Vinita1804, Yours is showing up alright, but just a tad bit late. I myself tried uploading different formats when I first saw this new text file submission, After few tries, I succeeded with a '.odt(Open Document Text).' I didn't know such a type even exists before.

      • 2 yıl önce
    2. vinita1804
      vinita1804
      • 2 yıl önce

      Thanks - I am still in a spin regarding this and truly appreciate the support. Thanks again...

      • 2 yıl önce
  • vinita1804
    vinita1804
    • 2 yıl önce

    Hi...I really fail to understand why my entry is drawing a blank. Can you possibly also include jpeg as one of the acceptable file types? Thanks, regards...

    • 2 yıl önce
    1. creativeoncall
      creativeoncall
      • 2 yıl önce

      Apparently, he's only looked at the first three entries.

      • 2 yıl önce
  • JAusten
    JAusten
    • 2 yıl önce

    Hello CH, prefer to have short, concise sentences? In how many words, please? Thank you.

    • 2 yıl önce
    1. CasualitySL
      Yarışma Sahibi
      • 2 yıl önce

      Thanks for asking, updated the description. Number of words doesn't matter, more the impact on people / candidated who will have read it.

      • 2 yıl önce
    2. JAusten
      JAusten
      • 2 yıl önce

      Thank you for the clarification.

      • 2 yıl önce
  • vinita1804
    vinita1804
    • 2 yıl önce

    I have created a docx file and a jpeg version of the same but it is not accepting both. I would be truly grateful for some guidelines to upload my version, thanks, regards...

    • 2 yıl önce
  • mssb23
    mssb23
    • 2 yıl önce

    Hello Sir, I will submit an entry. Please check it. Regards, Sreoshi

    • 2 yıl önce
  • ikhsanovic17
    ikhsanovic17
    • 2 yıl önce

    Can I re-write it tomorrow?

    • 2 yıl önce
    1. CasualitySL
      Yarışma Sahibi
      • 2 yıl önce

      Of course, the competition is on for a week.

      • 2 yıl önce

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