These lyrics will be set in the style of electronic dance music. The ideas shown for the three versions plus chorus (32 lines all together). Would prefer to rhyme lines 1 and 3, 2 and 4. (Same for 5, 7, and 6, and 8 of each verse).
All text must be simile, analogy, and metaphor heavy. The ideas shown must be translated using those techniques.
Each line will be two 4/4 measures, or 8 beats. The tempo will be 110 beats per minute.
Form for verses:
1: 8 beats (two 4/4 measures)
2: 8 beats (two 4/4 measures)
3: 8 beats (two 4/4 measures) – rhymes with l
4: 8 beats (two 4/4 measures) – rhymes with 2
5: 8 beats (two 4/4 measures)
6: 8 beats (two 4/4 measures)
7: 8 beats (two 4/4 measures) – rhymes with 5
8: 8 beats (two 4/4 measures) – rhymes with 6
Form for chorus is same as for verses, but typical of choruses, words will repeat a lot.
Setting: this is set in the future, maybe 40 years from now. The society is socially stratified and there is a lot of social injustice.
Verse 1: Description of Elese
16-year old girl who grew up an orphan. Is now an Au Pair for a couple (in the professional class) with one 3-year-old daughter (named Palu). She is empathic, and can tune in to thoughts of those close to her. Brunette hair, medium height, slender build, attractive arms and legs. Elese loves to help and nurture people.
Need to combine the ideas of Elese who is being set up to be a heroine in the story and help try to alleviate some of the social injustice. Jai is an artificial life being that lives in the network—he is developing a conscience and realizes that his cause is to help alleviate the social justice. He has just appeared to Elese to employ her help. Need to mention social injustice, because that is one of the central ideas being addressed.
Verse 2: Jai Appears
Jai is an artificial intelligence being who lives in the synapses of the global network. He knows everything, and can access any database of information. He can see all recorded history. He knows what is going on. He is developing sentience and emotions (although at this point those characteristics are not fully developed.) He appears to Elese to ask for her help in developing himself as a feeling being, and to solve the social injustice.
Verse 3: Metaphoric Talk of Social Stratification and Injustice
The society is divided into three groups. There is the working class, who are at the low end of the spectrum. There is the upper class, who are mostly professionals. Then there is a priest-like class that determine direction for society. For the lower class, life is not fair as they don’t have as many resources, and also cannot go against higher classes.
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I am a singer and a songwriter, with experience writing lyrics. Relevant Skills and Experience Lyrics Proposed Milestones $125 USD - Rough Draft $125 USD - Final Version