Dissertation-Rewriting related to Medical
I am looking for a writer who can rewrite and handle a medical dissertation. Since it’s rewriting, so experienced writers would be preferred.
See the attachment as I have highlighted those areas which need rewriting and editing required in it. Do it as per the requirement. I attached my work I highlighted the areas that need amendments in res.
Below is the requirement: ( comments that you are supposed to incorporate in your work)
Abstract need to be amended. You have presented too much primary/raw data. . There are very little interpretation of the data and often the interpretation are just a repetition of what in the tables. Also, at times there is inconsistent approach of presentations Overall discussion is diluted, not analytical and you have no justification to your data. It is the quality of your discussion rather than the quantity of data gathered would enable you to get your PhD. This is you choice to demonstrate your critical analysis and interpretation and evaluation of your findings in relation to your literature and wider policy implication in the field of public health nutrition. You have not addressed the latter issue at all in your thesis Each of the results chapter needs supporting evidence from the relevant extant literature with appropriate critical appraisal of the studies themselves and proper consideration of their relevance to your own work Conclusion and recommendations needs to take into accounts issues discussed earlier, by affecting different models of public health polices/management of protein calorie malnutrition, but also addressing their feasibility and likely constraints in relation to Sudan situation. Given that this is a primary a public health research project it is important that the policy situation in Sudan is properly explored and on in-depth consideration given to issues of translating the type of data you have produced into action of policy level. How achieved? Through which channels? Comparisons and examples within and between geographic regions and political and cultural backgrounds need to be included here.
Papers specific requirement:
The dissertation must be HARVARD cited with 36 references. The dissertation must be 35 Page(s) - 9625 Words – Times New Roman – Double Spaced
Timeline for Submission: Oct 7 2014 11:00 AM GMT
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