This is an urgent order. It needs to be done by 13:00, Aug 19, EST.
In this order, I will need you provide two sample essays for an English language test. The test is Celpip. I will use your model essays as teaching materials.
In Celpip test, there are 2 writing tasks. This order only focuses on Task 2. Task 2 is a response to opinion survey. For details, please download this guideline and review the parts about Task 2.
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The total score for the writing test is 12. And 10 out of 12 is considered good.
I have provided a sample question and a student model essay:
A sample student essay (This sample got a score of 9 out of 12):
Writing Task 2:
You are living in an apartment building. Recently, the management of the building want to improve the security by either installing a new lock for each door or having more cameras. They have sent out an opinion survey to see what the people living in the building prefer.
Option A: installing a new lock for each door
Option B: having more cameras
Choose the option that you prefer. Explain the reasons for your choice. Why do you prefer your choice? What problems are there with the other choice? Write 150-200 words.
Model answer (score of 9 out of 12):
I would love to have more security cameras in our building because they are more cost-effective than replacing new locks.
Firstly, compared with installing a new lock for each door, setting up more cameras is cheaper. For example, although the cost of each camera is higher than it of a lock, only two to four cameras are enough for each floor and the total expenses will be much lower. In addition, less installation fee will incur because less labor and time are required.
More importantly, cameras are more efficient than the locks. There are always a way to open a lock and when that happen, we do not know who break into our room. With the cameras, on the other hand, the thieves and robbers know that they are being monitored and the cameras will catch their faces when they do conduct illegal affairs. Plus, suspicious behaviors can also be detected by the cameras, which enables the securities to act before bad things really happen.
I believe the tenants will feel safer with more security cameras installed and I hope the building management will also agree on this option.
Word count: 190
NOW. HERE IS THE INSTRUCTION FOR THIS ORDER:
Please provide TWO model essays for the following writing task. Each essay should be 150-200 words. ONE model essay should prefer option A and THE OTHER model essay should prefer option B (when you do all the writings, please put yourself in a Canadian context)
Writing Task Prompt:
Physical Activity Survey
Your company blames a number of work-related accidents on employees' low level of physical fitness. The Human Resources Department of your company is surveying your opinion on how to promote a healthier lifestyle amongst its employees. The major question is whether the company should build a large gym facility in the company’s premises, or pay for employees to sign up for physical activities wherever they choose.
Choose the option that you prefer. Explain the reasons for your choice. Why do you prefer your choice? What problems are there with the other choice? Write about 150-200 words.
Option A: Company Gym: Large gym located in the company building. Employees will have 24-hour access to a large variety of fitness equipment and personal trainers.
Option B: Neighbourhood Gym or Activity: Monthly cash allowance for any physical activity of their choice.
Please provide TWO model essays for the writing task. Each essay should be 150-200 words. ONE model essay should prefer option A and THE OTHER model essay should prefer option B (when you do all the writings, please put yourself in a Canadian context)
My expectation is the model essays should be above 10 out of 12. Please read the evaluation standards in the guideline carefully.
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