Hi, I launched a website called veryfirsttime. I need the home page content rewritten so people will click on the buy now button. I had 3000 visitors but not one of them ended buying the book. I think I put too much information and did not tease the customer enough for him to buy the book and click on that buy button. I need someone to shorten the letter and make it appealing to customers and for them to want to know more by buying the book. Budget is low. Thank you very much. I attach the file of the content.