1. - In the first clip... can we insert a short clip toward the end of the scene where the truck skids to a stop... of two children faces shocked and panicked as though they see the truck coming at them ?
2 - With the text that "GuardApp is a simple tool using any Smartphone or tablet to ensure that crossing guards are actually at their assigned crosswalk...at the correct time."
.. A short scene where the crossing guard is holding a smartphone and click ... click... and we show the time 7:25 AM
With the text "GuardApp system ensures compliance and issues alerts. Alerts to police, school administrators, supervisors and parents."
... some visual of alerts being delivered to a school principle on a tablet... to a police officer on the radio... to a parent on a smartphone..
With "The Cloud based solution requires no installation, support or advanced fees." ... no server, no PC, No $$$ ... and the 'cloud'
"In addition, GuardApp provides parents the ability to report an absent school crossing guard with simply 3 clicks on a Smartphone."
Last scene... a smartphone... click..click...click... "A child is safe and alive."