Hi Al, finally finished my thesis.
I need to cut some words. If I have repeating myself or saying something in different ways, then please delete.
Also, I am trying to use high english level since it is my thesis, if you can help me in choosing selective words that would be great.
i. English grammar
iii. The flow of sentences and
iv. re-adjust sentences for better flow.
v. To change words or use different words to provide direct message.
vi. To insure the paragraph and sentences flow from one to the other.
vii. High English standards
Each sentence and paragraph need to flow from one to the other, this is really important.