Xiveti Inc. is launching its new website this month. We need to review the content and find grammatical/semantic errors.
Xiveti's main focus is Software Development and Internet of Things systems.
There are about 10 different pages - everything from service description to About page to Terms and Conditions. Amount of text to review is around 1000 words.
Please note, though, that it's not just a simple text review. We need feedback and review of a website as a whole - how it gets the message through, how different pages work together, etc. Every text element should be accounted for.
There is a simple task to show how well you understand this project. Please improve this paragraph as you see appropriate and send it to me in a PM:
Terms and Conditions
1. Scope of work (Security Audit)
Xiveti Inc. completes Web Application and Infrastructure security audit. Every malware or unwanted software, that is detected during the audit, is removed, and systems are hardened to prevent further unauthorized access. Xiveti Inc. reviews existing documents and suggests improvements. Upon completion of Security Audit, Xiveti Inc. provides a security report, stating what work was done to secure the systems, and what steps are recommended to keep systems secure.
Only native speakers, please! Technological background is highly preferred.