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I just need your opinion on a short story

Hello! So I have an easy job if anyone is interested. I have a short story that is only 7 pages long, 3,000 words or so, that I'm getting ready to publish soon as part of a collection, and the ending is driving me nuts! I have two different endings, both are very different from each other, and I can't decide which one to go with. So I'd like some more opinions (sooner, rather than later), and all I'm asking you to do is read it and message me back with your thoughts/opinion. I have a couple beta readers going through the whole book/collection now already, but I want to find out how they feel about it, as is, first, and also I'd like to get a few more opinions anyway. I thought I was happy with the ending I had originally, but then after some recent feedback, I decided to try taking it in a different direction, but I'm still not sure which is better. I want it to be the best it can be though! The story is just a simple slice of life/relationship piece (no action, no fantasy) that digs inside the mind of a now jealous wife who begins to suspect that her husband may be cheating on her, and the psychological toll it takes on her. If this doesn't sound like your thing, please don't apply. I need a reader that feels they would really enjoy reading something like this, not someone who's applying just to complete a quick easy job. Getting this ending right is very important to me. Oh, and, just for fun, if you read this entire project description and got to this part, then please show you read all of it by starting your proposal with the line "Got it!" Thank you, I look forward to your responses :)

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( 27 değerlendirme ) Glen Burnie, United States

Proje NO: #17453030

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melgalmes

Got it! And also, hello! :) I hope you are doing well. I'd like to have the opportunity to help you with your story. Thanks in advance for your consideration.

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ClementineL

"Got it!" As an English teacher and overall reading and writing enthusiast, I find so much joy in the creative writing process! One of my favourite things is when a former student returns to ask for help with a sto Daha Fazla

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vglaze

Got it!! I have a Bachelor of Arts in English and a minor in history from The University of Texas at Arlington. I am beginning my 30th year as a high school English teacher; therefore, I have taught, discussed, analy Daha Fazla

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mciavucco

"Got it!" Hi there! This sounds like an interesting story. I'm a fiction writer as well as a content writer and editor. I've been part of writing groups for over 7 years - we critique each other's fiction (usually s Daha Fazla

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spencsinc5

Got it! I used to write book reviews roughly four, five years ago. I also work on a small literary magazine: Knight Gallery so I am used to reading lots of work in a short amount of time while still presenting quality Daha Fazla

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Hello, I can write the perfect book or e-book for your needs. Not only can I turn a simple sentence into something intriguing by using powerful and exciting words, but I can make the reader anxious to turn to the next Daha Fazla

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Got it. I'd love to help you on the ending of your story. I am an experienced writer and editor. I've been in this industry for 7 years now. I have a vast experience in editing novels, websites, scripts, and academi Daha Fazla

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Dear Employer, You have specified that you need proofreading and the desire word limit is 3000 .I deliver grammatically accurate, consistent outcomes for your proofreading needs, ensuring that your voice and style alw Daha Fazla

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Hi, My proposal is in regards to writing a short story. I'll be using my own experience of last 5 years and relevant skills to come up with the desired results for your task. My relationship will provide the id Daha Fazla

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BTranslated

Hi there, For accurate high-quality proofreading contact me. I am a native English speaker and I have over 8 years of experience as a writer and editor. I read through all content a minimum of three times to ensure Daha Fazla

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Hoffman24

"Hi, When it comes to writing, you need an experienced, dedicated, and honest professional who can take your project to the next level. Look no farther. I have the experience, skills, and focus that your project requi Daha Fazla

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BlueTranslate

Hello sir, I am skilled and professional English proof-reader and editor (sentence, grammar and spelling). English is my mother language. My rate is very low and without complete 100% error free proofread, no need to p Daha Fazla

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Andyessy

Got it Hi, I'm Chummy and I would love to read your work and help out with a nice ending. I love reading such storied and being a married woman, i can offer you my perspective. I have first degree in mass communi Daha Fazla

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cmayfield005C

Got it Hi, I am a former staff writer for a daily newspaper and have been freelancing for 7 years as a writer and editor. My background in English literature has proven to be a huge asset for corporate clients, who Daha Fazla

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writerleaf

"Got it!" Hi, You are looking for an opinion on your short story. I have read your project description and I have understood. I would like to have a chat with you about the project and discuss more about how I Daha Fazla

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revival786

Hi there, I am a professional in providing high quality short stories. I am highly interested and I will love to assist you in this project. Regards, Revival Sample Work: [login to view URL] Daha Fazla

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mtdevil369

Hi, I am thought read your project description. I am interested your project. I am successful and 100% complete your work... Thank you...

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Shawkat2012

Hi there, I have "Got it!" Then why not hire me? I will comprehensively read your short story and give an appropriate opinion on it. Please, note that I am a freelance writer, editor, and proofreader with great a Daha Fazla

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Hello, I consider myself a skilled writer that strives to make the customer happy and completely satisfied. Since I have excellent grammar and spelling capabilities, I am able to determine the concept that is trying to Daha Fazla

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I like that your project is straightforward and I love reading, I would like to complete it today if possible and give you the feedback you need. This is what I do on a regular day: I provide professional and univer Daha Fazla

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Hi, I’d like to be considered for your rewriting position related to rewriting and proofreading the content. I am a qualified proofreader with the desired skills to ensure the quality of work as expected. I have Daha Fazla

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Tomobrien1

Got it! Hi, I'm a native English speaker based in Mexico. Your description sounds like a bit like a Raymond Carver story (whose work I've always appreciated). My degree had a modern American Literature component, Daha Fazla

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