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I’ve just finished drafting an Indonesian short-story script in the adventure genre, written for a teenage audience. Before I take it any further, I need a fresh set of expert eyes to tighten the pacing, sharpen the dialogue, and make sure every page truly resonates with young readers. Here’s what I’m hoping you can do for me: • Perform a full editorial sweep—grammar, spelling, and stylistic consistency. • Flag any plot gaps or character moments that could use extra punch. • Deliver two versions: one showing tracked changes and comments, and one clean copy ready for submission. If you’ve worked on YA or coming-of-age fiction, that insight will be invaluable. Send over samples that demonstrate your touch with teen-focused narratives, and let’s make this story shine.
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Hi there, Based on your brief, we understand you've drafted an Indonesian teen adventure story and are looking to refine its flow, dialogue, and emotional resonance. At 8veer Consultancy, our editorial team includes fiction editors experienced in YA and coming-of-age narratives. We'll provide a full editorial sweep—tightening pacing, enhancing character beats, and polishing language—while preserving your voice. You'll receive both a tracked version with comments and a clean, submission-ready copy tailored for a teenage readership. Best Regards, 8veer Consultancy
$25 USD 7 gün içinde
5,5
5,5

Hey Tiara .., I just finished reading the job description and I see you are looking for someone experienced in Short Stories, Beta Reading, Editing, Copy Editing, Proofreading, Ghostwriting, Fiction and Writing Tutoring. This is something I can do. Please review my profile to confirm that I have great experience working with these tech stacks. While I have few questions: 1. These are all the requirements? If not, Please share more detailed requirements. 2. Do you currently have anything done for the job or it has to be done from scratch? 3. What is the timeline to get this done? Why Choose Me? 1. I have done more than 250 major projects. 2. I have not received a single bad feedback since the last 5-6 years. 3. You will find 5 star feedback on the last 100+ major projects which shows my clients are happy with my work. Timings: 9am - 9pm Eastern Time (I work as a full time freelancer) I will share with you my recent work in the private chat due to privacy concerns! Please start the chat to discuss it further. Regards, Haseeb.
$15 USD 36 gün içinde
3,2
3,2

As an accomplished English writer, lecturer and content specialist, I know that a superior manuscript demands more than just impeccable grammar and punctuation; it calls for a keen understanding of the intended audience. In the completion of my MPhil in English Literature, I have studied coming-of-age narratives extensively and honed my ability to make words work for a specific target group, such as teenagers. Let me polish your Indonesian short story on teenage adventure by performing thorough stylistic consistency checks, improving pacing, dialogue, and ensuring that every page resonates with your youthful readers effectively. My solid background, spanning over eight years of professional experience in academic writing, content creation, and digital/UX writing has refined my aptitude to adapt to any text-genre and write in multiple styles. This adaptability is perfectly matched to your requirement: to improve the punchiness of character moments while resolving any discrepancies or plot gaps. I am also fully versed in working with tracked changes and comments, providing you with two versions - one clean copy ready for submission plus one highlighting my editorial decisions to enhance transparency. Let's create writing that works - not just for youngsters but for everyone who appreciates the magic within the pages.
$15 USD 40 gün içinde
2,6
2,6

As an immensely skilled wordsmith, I'm confident I can elevate your teen adventure story from great to truly exceptional. Not only do my three decades as a published author speak to my affinity for storytelling, but they've also honed my ability to engage and resonate with diverse audiences. On that note, I'd be delighted to share with you samples that precisely illustrate the fresh, contemporary voice young readers crave. Moreover, my proficiency in drafting & reviewing contracts and performing sophisticated legal research makes me discerning with plot gaps or any inconsistencies —qualities every writer desires in a critical editor. With an overlay of my tech-savviness and familiarity with online platforms you can trust a polished delivery that is also adaptable to potential future requirements. It would be remiss of me not to mention my English Language expertise consisting of ESL teaching and deep understanding of English grammar and structure. This combination will give your project a comprehensively styled consistency while clarifying any vague language hurdles that may arise alongside. You'll receive two versions: one clean copy ready for submission and the other showcasing all edits, ensuring complete transparency throughout our collaboration. In sum, my legal skills blended with extraordinary writing capabilities uniquely position me as the freelancer best fit for your project's requirements.
$20 USD 40 gün içinde
0,7
0,7

Hello there We enjoy working on teen focused adventure stories and helping them flow better for young readers. Fresh eyes and clear edits are where we add real value. From our experience editing short fiction and coming of age narratives we handle full grammar and style checks while keeping the voice natural and engaging. We will review pacing dialogue and character moments then deliver one tracked version with comments and one clean submission ready copy. Do you have a target word count or publication goal for this story Best regards Future Station
$15 USD 1 gün içinde
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0,0

Hi there, I’ll tighten pacing, sharpen dialogue, and ensure every page resonates with teen readers. I edit YA and coming-of-age fiction, with a track record in adventurous narratives that keep young voices authentic. I’ll deliver a full editorial sweep (grammar, spelling, style) and flag plot gaps or character moments that need punch. You’ll receive two versions: one with tracked changes and inline comments, and a clean manuscript ready for submission. If the draft is Indonesian, I can provide bilingual notes and, if desired, translation notes; if English, I’ll maintain the Indonesian flavor while making it accessible to a global audience. Samples of my teen-focused edits can be shared on request. Turnaround: five days total (fast initial pass, then revisions). Deliverables: two versions plus a concise memo. Next steps: I can start immediately on receipt of your file and any reference materials. Best regards,
$15 USD 32 gün içinde
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I focus on building straightforward editorial reviews that are easy to use, easy to maintain, and delivered without friction. For this project, I’ll keep the process efficient, the feedback clear, and the revisions precise. I understand your goal to enhance pacing, sharpen dialogue, and ensure the story connects with teenage readers. I will deliver a thorough editorial sweep addressing grammar, style, and consistency, while flagging plot and character areas needing more impact. You’ll receive two versions: one with tracked changes and comments, and a clean, submission-ready copy. I have experience editing YA fiction that balances narrative flow with authentic teen voices. I’m ready to begin as soon as we confirm the scope and timeline. Regards, Tiaan
$18 USD 40 gün içinde
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I wrote fictional stories back in the days so I have knowledge on what you’re looking for. I’m good with grammar and spelling and proofreading overall. I could help you to revise your manuscript and work with you to help make it better
$17 USD 40 gün içinde
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I’d be genuinely pleased to collaborate with you on refining your Indonesian YA adventure short story. I bring a careful, story-first editorial approach that strengthens language, rhythm, and narrative cohesion while shaping pacing and dialogue to speak directly to teenage readers. Beyond correcting grammar and style, I focus on deepening tension, clarifying character motivation, and sharpening emotional turning points so every scene carries purpose and momentum. You will receive two complete manuscript versions: one marked with tracked changes and insightful editorial comments, and a second clean draft polished to submission-ready standards. With experience editing YA and coming-of-age fiction—particularly adventure narratives centered on growth, courage, and discovery—I’ll help your story reach its fullest impact while preserving its authentic voice. With thanks, Nathaniel. Replies within an hour
$20 USD 40 gün içinde
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Considering my vast experience in content writing field including incredible amounts of MUN documents , English Speeches and a lot of Essay writing competitions that alone makes me the perfect candidate for this job but not to mention my creativity and attention to detail, this is meant to be.
$15 USD 40 gün içinde
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I'm perfect in copywriting content writing article writing research writing proof reading editing poetry creative writing script writing ghost writing and short stories and everything you need
$20 USD 40 gün içinde
0,0
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Hey Arsy A., I just finished reading the job description and I see you are looking for someone experienced in Copy Editing, Fiction, Short Stories, Editing, Beta Reading, Ghostwriting, Writing Tutoring and Proofreading. This is something I can do. Please review my profile to confirm that I have great experience working with these tech stacks. While I have few questions: 1. These are all the requirements? If not, Please share more detailed requirements. 2. Do you currently have anything done for the job or it has to be done from scratch? 3. What is the timeline to get this done? Why Choose Me? 1. I have done more than 250 major projects. 2. I have not received a single bad feedback since the last 5-6 years. 3. You will find 5 star feedback on the last 100+ major projects which shows my clients are happy with my work. Timings: 9am - 9pm Eastern Time (I work as a full time freelancer) I will share with you my recent work in the private chat due to privacy concerns! Please start the chat to discuss it further. Regards, Syed.
$15 USD 21 gün içinde
0,0
0,0

Proven expertise in process optimisation, digital transformation. Strong track record of building and maintaining client relationships, leading cross-functional teams, and leveraging technology to deliver scalable, results-driven solutions. Skilled in stakeholder management, strategic planning, and aligning business processes with organizational goals to enhance performance and profitability
$20 USD 40 gün içinde
0,0
0,0

Hi, I don't wanna take up a lot of your time reading long proposals. I can assure you the best quality work and guess what, I also have a group of friends who can also proofread for you through me and that can provide you with a wider perspective. Hope to work together.
$23 USD 40 gün içinde
0,0
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Can you show the reference that's how you would know am i suitable. I wanna give it a try so can i give it a try yyyyy hghju
$20 USD 8 gün içinde
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I'm ready to build and develop the story as needed.l will carefully create and shape the content according to the services you require.?
$20 USD 48 gün içinde
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Hello, I am an experienced editor and proofreader with strong expertise in YA and teen-focused fiction. I can carefully proofread and edit your adventure story, improving grammar, spelling, style, pacing, and dialogue while ensuring the story resonates with young readers. I will flag any plot gaps or inconsistencies and provide two versions: one with tracked changes and comments, and one clean, submission-ready copy. I deliver high-quality work on time and am confident I can help make your story shine.
$20 USD 48 gün içinde
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This is Ross, and I'm not just any editor--with my immense passion for punctuation, I live and breathe the written word. Having penned eleven fantasy novels, seven anthologies, and a space opera, I understand first-hand the importance of targeted editing in moulding a story that resonates deeply with a specific audience. Your Indonesian short-story is an adventure aimed towards teenagers - and with years of experience in YA fiction, I know I can finesse your draft into a powerful narrative that will captivate young readers. I have an eye for timing, sharp dialogue delivery and above all ensuring stylistic consistency throughout. As a self-edited author, I'm meticulous when it comes to grammar, spelling and continuity, delivering not one but two comprehensive versions; one with tracked changes/comments for discussion purposes, and one clean copy, ready for submission. From spotting plot gaps and character nuances to crafting engaging narratives that resonate deeply with their intended audience- this is my forte. Let's make your story shine together! Reach out for samples of my work to appreciate first-hand why my insights in editing could be invaluable for your project!
$15 USD 40 gün içinde
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Hi there, I'm Gamsi, a linguistics graduate currently pursuing a master's in generative grammar with over 5 years of editing experience and 8+ years as an English language and literature teacher. I'd love to bring my expertise to your Indonesian short-story script. I'll: - Perform a full editorial sweep (grammar, spelling, stylistic consistency) - Flag plot gaps or character moments for extra punch - Deliver tracked changes + comments and a clean copy With experience editing teen-focused narratives, I'm confident in making your story shine. Award me your project let's discuss further. Thank you
$20 USD 40 gün içinde
0,0
0,0

Hello there! I'm a beta reader with a keen eye for detail and a love for mystery & thrillers. I'd love to help polish your story with honest, constructive feedback on pacing, flow, and overall impact. I'll provide insights on what works, what doesn't, and where you can take it to the next level. Looking forward to hearing from you
$20 USD 40 gün içinde
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