So what I am basically looking for besides general language corrections, are the following:
- My initial summary I do not feel is sexy enough. So if you can somehow try to rewrite it to be a bit more sexy, without changing the content, that would be
- I would like it to be consistent to be first person (The summary is anyway third person as it is now)
- If you think some of the bullet points under each of the sections could be written better I would be happy about that
UK English is what I am looking for. And since I need to input it into a CV tool, the formatting is not something you need to worry about, as long as you do not increase the word count much.