Let's go thru 1 by 1. This are what client and their marketing team wants.
Go thru this type of site to see what makes a GREAT internet sales write up
- [url removed, login to view]
a) comparison chart <--very important
b) don't buy other sawdust pills
c) Guarantee to work
d) money back guarantee
e) free gifts
f) newspaper cuttings
g) check list
h) Banners that "discount if you PURCHASE now".
i) Free Articles about "Male Enhancement Articles
j) Must Read "Male Extra Links"
k) A great sales copy letter <--this one we'll leave it to a professional sales copywriter to do it.
They always emphasize on safe and ALL NATURAL PRODUCTS. (We are the same too)
I've listed a good site that shows how to convert a sales. Your job is to do homework on products "Gel / Patch" and study the ingredient , do a good write up for the main page with comparison chart as listed above (a-k) and also help label the box. This are all ingredient that helps men enhancement. Here are some of the competitors work.
First of all the GEL (Main competitors are [url removed, login to view] and [url removed, login to view] and [url removed, login to view])
- If you see their main sales page.
- Consist of Comparison Chart (very important)
- Making known their uneffective products to bring up their own brand.
- Focus on the "Quick Absorbing" Cream .. Nanotechnology , Transdermal delivery.
- How does it help the penis. The anatomy of a penis the blood vessel "ex: corpus spongiosum, deep dorsal veins , dorsal artery" (very important
Similar , we have to come up with the product HOW IT WORKS the marketing part of it..
The PENIS ([url removed, login to view] <-- see the image)
Explain how it helps blood vessel .. stuff like that..the cream helps solve this,that.. etc etc..
- It's known that this ingredient " helps push the dorsal artery and increase blood flow to the penis"
- Getting some testimonial / scientific / Clinical trial proof or it works or ingredient that works "Clinical trial done by [url removed, login to view] 1956 (Case:122345) bla..bla.. "
One of the key thing to mention on the label box too. (NANOTECHNOLOGY <-- known as quick absorption) As coconut oil is known to be 1 micron absorption [url removed, login to view] Please have a look at the website, see the diagram and write up and see how u can explain the ingredient with nano technology being so small absorb to your skin. THIS IS THE MARKETING THING.
Q) What is nanotechnology ? I really don't know much. What is the ingredient ? I don't know but label has to have it. To explain quick absorption. TAGLINE = Quick Absorption. Results within minutes.
This product is WATER BASED CREAM and is white in color we call it GEL because it sound cool. We have to be sure about using the term oil or extract. You will have to give your advise on this.
(As they say they can't reveal the secret to their super cream) but listed a few that has interesting health property for men's vitality.
INGREDIENT = Butea Superba , Eurycoma Longifolia , Jojoba , Coconut oil (look at green tea oil , it helps absoption) , Uncaria Gambir , leech extract
ONE OF THE KEY THING about this product .. Customer can use it on their hand and TEST IT.
Once applied on the skin , u can see the VEINS POPPING OUT almost immediately.
A little numming effect. So it helps PREMATURE ENJACULATION TOO..
Second product (main competitors are "maxipatch , maxiderm , roaring tiger patch"
- Pretty much the same as above
- If you see the comparison chart of maleextra , vigrx (you can pick up some pointers for both GEL and PATCH)
- Look at how they do a drawing on the patch and anatomy of which parts work and how it helps the penis <-- i hope i can say it better but this is the key and i've given u all sort of pointers on doing a good professional write up. Do the same for the gel too.
- Explain it slightly different and even better. Even comparison chart, put in a price that we are slightly cheaper (Even the price for both product is not set) client could drop in more patch. Example 1 month + free 1 week patch. Etc etc.. U need to come up with the chart.
Also providing a picture would be important.
If you have any questions, please feel free to shoot back and email to me.
Please send in your best pricing first and if we can agree on this job then we can move ahead.
I also like to see your previous work in this category or niche.