I need a sales letter website that sells premium grade essential oils at a high conversion rate. I'll take care of design and programming - just wow me with your sales skills.
There will be 3 "sales letters".
1) Give me your email address and you'll get a free ebook
2) Buy a $150 Kit
3) 2 or 3 Followup Emails that go out, selling the oils
Here was my first stab: [url removed, login to view] You'll need to tell me SPECIFIC THINGS that could be improved on this to get this project.