Chinese Translation Review – Second Pair of Eyes (Proofreading & QA)

I have a Chinese translation that was done by someone else. It's about 500 words (roughly one page). I need a second pair of eyes to review it against the original English and catch any errors, awkward phrasing, or missing meaning. This is not a full retranslation. Your job is to: Read the original English (I will provide it) Read the existing Chinese translation Flag any issues you find (wrong words, unnatural phrasing, omissions) Suggest corrections You will deliver a side‑by‑side comparison with your suggested changes clearly marked. Think of it as a quality assurance pass – not starting from scratch, just polishing what's already there. Sample Task (Include in your proposal) Original English: "Please ensure the product is stored in a cool, dry place away from direct sunlight." Existing Chinese translation (to review): "请确保产品存放在阴凉干燥的地方，远离直射阳光。" Your task: Is there any issue with this translation? If yes, suggest a correction. If no, simply confirm it's fine. Deliverables A Word document with three columns: Original English Existing Chinese translation Your suggested correction (or “OK” if no change needed) No formatting required – just clean text Requirements Native Chinese speaker with strong English Attention to detail – small errors can change meaning Able to explain corrections briefly (1‑2 words per change)

Project ID: 40525779