Mystery Novel Developmental Edit

I have started a mystery manuscript (5 chapters) that now needs a deep developmental edit. I’m looking for scene-by-scene feedback that drills into plot structure, character development, and pacing. Here’s what I have in mind: • A marked-up document (Track Changes in Word or an equivalent) with specific notes in the margin for each scene. • A separate editorial report that pulls back to discuss overall structure, character arcs, and momentum, highlighting any sagging sections or logic gaps. • Clear, actionable suggestions rather than broad generalities—if a reveal comes too early, point to the exact paragraph; if a character’s motivation feels weak, propose concrete fixes. I’ll provide the completed chapters. 1. Inline comments that explain why a change is recommended. 2. A summary outlining next-step priorities so I can revise efficiently. If this level of granular, story-first editing is in your wheelhouse, let’s talk timelines and your process.

Project ID: 40287504