BoxMovil, by applesandideas (vers2)
Dear CH, Thanks for your valuable feedback. Please find attached the updated version of my entry (updates/changes based on your comments). Hoping you like it and be honored by awarding my entry. Thanks in advance for letting me know. Kind regards, applesandideas
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Yarışma Sahibi - 8 yıl önce
thanks
- 8 yıl önce
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applesandideas
- 8 yıl önce
Hi, and thanks to you for awarding my entry! :) Comentarios recibidos. Los iré revisando y estamos en contacto. Un saludo.
- 8 yıl önce
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Yarışma Sahibi - 8 yıl önce
Hello, please let me know that you get my message, and we are ok with the changes.
- 8 yıl önce
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Yarışma Sahibi - 8 yıl önce
Los iconos deberian mantener los colores del branding negro, amarillo y blanco. Gracias
- 8 yıl önce
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Yarışma Sahibi - 8 yıl önce
egundo 0:09
¿Necesitas un lugar en el cuál puedas guardar de forma segura tus cosas?
Porque...
...no tienes suficiente espacio en tu hogar?
...te vas fuera del país?
...piensas remodelar tu hogar?
...te mudas a un nuevo hogar?
...necesitas cosas sólo en temporadas?
(NOTA: agregarle íconos a cada motivo e ir acumulando los motivo, para que al final estén todos juntos en segundo 0:16)
segundo 0:28
¡Tan fácil como...!
segundo 0:57
agregar lámina: SÉ PRÁCTICO
(y luego,finalizar con: AHORRA TIEMPO Y DINERO CON...)
=a todas las láminas le dejaría más tiempo.. para que se pueda leer con calma- 8 yıl önce
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Yarışma Sahibi - 8 yıl önce
Hola, te envio las modificiaciones:
- 8 yıl önce
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Yarışma Sahibi - 8 yıl önce
So i want to ask you.. if i will award you now... we can start working about the last modifications ? you give me a option to correct the text and some little things ? please let me know asap. thanks
- 8 yıl önce
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Yarışma Sahibi - 8 yıl önce
Hey, thanks for the changes. and your modifications, its now very good, but i need to made some correction of text and some little things on first of the video second 0:09 the text is very fast... and a lot of text, maybe it will be better to put small icons and doesnt eliminate the text...
- 8 yıl önce
