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Hey there hope you like my entry. Feel free to contact me with constructive cristism. I have used a crayon style technique to make it more appealing as a childrens book. let me know what you think:) thanks!

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  • jasetheace30
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    • 5 yıl önce

    The colour scheme is exquisite. The only criticism I have is that the poses of the characters appear a bit 'stilted' and unnatural, but I suspect this is intended to be part of the style? I will show my daughter this, as I am doing with all entries I give 3 stars once the contest closes.

    • 5 yıl önce
    1. laramesanza
      laramesanza
      • 5 yıl önce

      Thank you so much for your kind words! Yes im an artist, so my illustration work tends to focus on the color and having that natural painting style texture. I agree they are a bit " stiff" firstly because I wanted to show off the character design , so you could see them head on . But in general this is the style in which i draw but If i moved the little girl sideways, facing the wall maybe sitting down with her legs crossed would give more " motion". The positioning of the characters can be changed and worked on , i just wanted to focus on the character design and their expressions. hope your daughter likes it:)

      • 5 yıl önce