New Chocolate Packaging
Hi.. Kindly have a look on the Box,Greeting Card & the Bag design. Appreciate your Feedback. Looking forward your response :) Thank you.
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Yarışma Sahibi - 9 yıl önce
Carefully improve your work based on our suggestions one by one. U are in our final list. See your final perfect shot soon.
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digitalartsguru
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Entry #72 . Thank you
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digitalartsguru
- 9 yıl önce
Hi.. Thank you & Appreciate your Feedback. Sure I will incorporate all your comments into my next submission. Thank you.
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Yarışma Sahibi - 9 yıl önce
Come on, don't let us waiting too long. Comparing other work, the front of your greeting card should be improved. Our suggestion: As the greeting card is a common one fits for 4 flavor versions. So: 1. filling the centre area (slogan area) with dark color, like black or dark brown; 2. filling the flowers around with the four colors, which used in 4 flavor version. Make the flower wreath colorful. 3. change the color of cocoa icon accordingly. So that, the greeting card is not ONLY PINK version, but a common one for every versions.
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Yarışma Sahibi - 9 yıl önce
=For Plastic Bag Cover=
The cover is not good. The plastic bag would be made in transparent, so that the chocolate inside could be seen from outside. Bag sample also mentioned in pdf page 4. Good example is #51 "desing bag" picture.
Looking forward to your last perfect work soon! Good luck.- 9 yıl önce
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Yarışma Sahibi - 9 yıl önce
=For Greeing Card=
1. The greeting card is good. Could you add the transparent background (the cocoa icon part) to the upper inside page and the bottom area, just leave the central area space for text.
2. Provide the backside of card, keep it simple likes #43 pink frame picture.- 9 yıl önce
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Yarışma Sahibi - 9 yıl önce
Very very good job! Maybe here are the "final comments", good luck!
=For Box Cover=
1. The color of coffee flavor cover should be changed, not grey but dark brown, likes #18 . And the word under the logo is not Chocolate but Coffee.
2. Please provide the backside of box cover! Mentioned in pdf PAGE 4. Good example of the layout of the logo, slogan and description part is #50 . Just add the words part in the centre of backside cover.
3. Show me the color of box base to each flavor cover version. Mentioned in pdf page 4.- 9 yıl önce
