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Hello, I created this first concept for mead, I hope you like it ... everything can be edited ... If you can comment to improve my proposal, it would be great! Greetings, Julio!

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  • salmistaextremo
    salmistaextremo
    • 5 yıl önce

    Thank you very much for your comment ... I will work on those details and update ... Greetings!

    • 5 yıl önce
  • FadedIvoryMead
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 5 yıl önce

    I like the simplistic layout and the comb effect background; remember it is a 16 oz. can so it's taller (think of the Monster energy cans) which gives you more space to work with.
    Outside of that, shrink down the black area? It catches the eye, but appears as a void... I like the placement of logo but that could be less "center stage", and if you could also scroll the company name across the "shoulder" of the can, the bevel just below the lid.

    You're starting out in a good place though!

    • 5 yıl önce
  • FadedIvoryMead
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 5 yıl önce

    Hello Julio,

    • 5 yıl önce