Genel Açıklama Panosu

  • jaylopez999
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 10 yıl önce

    1. Can you make the bullets be aligned on the middle horizontal plane with the words next to that bullet?
    2. on "help trauma patients" the next word should be "and"
    3. next line is "Build a Good Safe Device"
    4. Make all bullet text use initial caps
    5. Make the "We Affect Lives" [

    • 10 yıl önce
    1. Pedro1973
      Pedro1973
      • 10 yıl önce

      sure, i can make the changes, sorry about errors

      • 10 yıl önce
  • jaylopez999
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 10 yıl önce

    There also needs to be clear progression on starting with the "what", moving to the "how" and ending up at our "why".

    • 10 yıl önce
  • jaylopez999
    Yarışma Sahibi
    • 10 yıl önce

    make the "We Affect Lives" the most important thing. Check the spelling for "affect".

    • 10 yıl önce