For now, I want someone to rewrite an outline, without changing the ideas. The thesis statement must be strong (well written). The topic sentences are all similar, which is not good. I'm trying to avoid repetition and I want them to be strong and clear!
Later, Saturday or Sunday I'm going to attach an article. I want it to be proofread, edited and rewritten if necessary.
P.S. the outline must be submitted in the next five hours!!